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Hi Author. It's a very good story. No doubt about it. Every emotion you have displayed in your writing's are excellent. But I really pitied Claire.
115 chapters 4-10-24
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Thank you....
absolutely horrible!
What the actual hell??? Where is the rest of the story!!!!!
Really liked this book. My biggest criticism is that sometimes it felt like the chapters didn't flow and we were missing something. Like we jumped a few hours or a day ahead with no transition or followup on what happened.
love it ❤️❤️
fun storyline!
I wasn’t sure to begin with, but I’ve really gotten into the characters
Some areas jump around a lot, but are easy to follow. I feel that just more meat to the story would help in these areas. The writer has a bright future in the book with a little extra
Love this book!! What’s the eta on book 2
well written, please keep the updating coming
overal interesting story and was written nicely. however, need improvement on the English as I can't understand some sentence, what author trying to convey, like 'I won't 'weave' this time', and many others. seems like direct translation from author native language. otherwise, it's a good book
Love this book, keeps me coming back to reed it again.
