This is what I would call a great concept that was poorly executed. The idea of the story is great, the summary accurately portrays the idea thus drawing you in. But once reading it the interest quickly dies out. The Grammer is bad, no other way to put it. The character development is shallow next to non existent. Its rushed, no real connection formed between the reader and MC. Its more of a story u read to fulfill ur power trip fantasies. Reading it expecting anything else will disappoint u.
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