I thought I commented on this :|. (Going off what I remember, haven’t read in a while since there were no new chapters ~ch280) Well anyways this novel is really really great. The fight scenes are great the Mc isn’t some omniscient god, although he is getting stronger than the normal person. He has his weaknesses and his strengths and he grows. His personality grows, it changes. It’s nice, coming from multiple one personality Mc’s to have one that changes due to what happens. I highly recommend this novel.
Novel is not complete... please upload the next chapters asap.....
This is more like an 'inspired' novel from⁷ "Birth Of the Demonic Sword" from the dragon fight to the guards teaching him, all of it. Being inspired by a novel and making your own base on that is completely fine, but getting completely influenced is also bad. Your novel just feels like another iteration of "BoDS" it's insane how similar it is. Just from reading this i already know you're a big fan of "BoDS" This is more like a fanfic than anything. Sorry but except for Writing Quality and Updating Stability, I'll give the others a one star. I hope you can carve your own mold someday.
Beautiful storyline, it is quite sad though, that the queen had to be murdered in the massacre. Looking forward to Tamiko and his quest for vengeance.
when this novel will update again, i can't hold my curiosity anymore what will happen next
it's fun to read, it doesn't feel rushed, the translation is good, the main character isn't boring or beta. in general it's a good fanfic, I'm just afraid of the frequency of posting the chapters.
I read the authors previous work, RWTSS, and the MC there and here has the same vibe, and reading the first chapters of these novel, he's not that narcissist as William :DMost of the magic related web novels are more serious in pursuing their magic. This one may/will have comedic antics just like William on RWTSS, or greater. Let's see his adventures in the academy in pursuit of magic.
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Initially thought that this would be a promising read, but disappointment comes easily.I think many things could have been handled with greater wisdom and intellect. Lots of misunderstandings brought about by the initial situation he already is in when we start the story - but there seems to be little to no attempt at any communication or reconciliation thus far (trial read). All parties are hot-blooded (but it's military, so ok I guess), but could be more military-esque by going through certain channels and utilizing certain resources. It's a hot mess of a situation and a hot mess of an MC. Violence seems to be the only answer, and it doesn't solve the root of problems.
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This is just another lazily written system novel. These things appear like ants out of the woodwork. I am astounded that this lazy writing is still widely praised by hundreds of people. Then again these are the same people to enjoy an isekai novel about a main character being a stick. Overall the quality works on the site are terrible.