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It caught my attention I hope they release this novel and put it to vote for it, I am already tired of novels about systems, it is about time that we have novels with Mc workers

this is utter garbage don't read it .......,........................................this is utter garbage don't read it .......,........................................this is utter garbage don't read it .......,........................................this is utter garbage don't read it .......,........................................this is utter garbage don't read it .......,........................................this is utter garbage don't read it .......,........................................

I've read half the novel at chp 31 and it is almost all filled with filler most of the chapters aren't even needed or do anything for the story of the information in the 31 chapters it would only fill 5 good chapters

I hate it when a woman gets everything for free but still ridicule's the person she got it from even in the female lead stories it's always a man who pampers the woman I don't understand why it's always that way why can't you be the other way around so yeah I will not read it because I hate it

Honestly one of the best plots i have read the only problem is execution it just hard to read other than that the novel is awesome

I'm up to chapter 30 right now. The novel is generic, as if any other person were to reincarnate as a novel-type scenario. But the writing quality is irritating, and I don't mean the grammar; rather, the manner the author writes the story is irksome; I can't count how many times the protagonist breaches the fourth wall, which makes me cringe at times, and there are simply too many info dumps.

It is a nice story . The author has written it well.

Love the story, A few grammar errors here and there, but not bad.  It is a great new take for a cultivation novel. Not the same old story redone with new characters.  Good job, can't wait to read more.

Well i dont really care if it got better or anything but i lost interest after 40 chapters. It was written great and all i kust feel like the author didnt appreciate the mc and always implemented higher level and then suddenly the entire story focused on their level and it just sort of forgot the mc as i would say

I like the story, the plots not really unique but its entertaining to read. My one issue with this novel is, well, the romance aspect of it. I don't care if the MC is deranged or a lunatic, however it doesn't make any sense why its in the plot. Where exactly does MC even find time for a romance is the grand scheme of things?!?!?It's so unrealistic and contradictory to how you established character... how exactly does romance fit into a novel where the protag is motivated by ambition to overcome the laws of the world in the novel?He wants powers, he actively strives for it and disregards the life of others like insects to achieve what he wants.... and now your trying to make me believe he can suddenly love after all that he's done and willing to do?It's ridiculous. You don't establish the essence of your character as ruthless and power hungry, devoid of feeling and morality, only seeking power, to add in a romance in the middle of the novel....You might ask why you shouldn't do this? Easy! Because someone willing to do anything for power would NEVER LOVE ANYONE that would become a HUGE weakness. It contradicts your plot and established MC's sense of self/motivations/goals that the author wrote HIMSELF.You could see from the earlier chapters of this novel that the author kept trying to find ways to make a romance happen, inserting the obvious FL every chance he got and it only got worse, especially at around chapter(s) 592+ onwards. It would have been all great except how the MC progressed many many chapters earlier. We know that he's a psychopath, and he lacks any feelings. By the time the romance (AKA lovesick desperate author wants some MEOWWW) comes in, its not only unbelievable, it's an insult to readers intelligence and time spent reading.

Finished the raw, The MC has a system that instantly make him the best at sports, tech , studies etc and he uses it to face smack his enemies that are after his girl (his GF is dumb, so prepare for kidnappings/ getting tricked) The mc is willing to remove by the roots ( after his enemies are done banging open the front door)There will be evil Japanese (only appear once or twice) but MC doesn’t wipe them all out There is no harem You will be constantly reminded how handsome the mc is every other chapter and later upgraded to handsome and rich

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