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The current 33 chapters are not enough to make a real review, but as it was a pleasant read so far, I give it 4 stars. I like stories about mc that get stronger by devouring or copying the power of others and this parasitising ability does just that. Therefore I sincerely hope that the story is thought through and won't be dropped midway because the author made the Mc too stupidly op... And maybe more than 2 chapters a week? Pretty please ?
good translation quality, great story development, interesting character design, good background. over good quality.................................................
Just the first 6 chapters absolutely amazed me you should put some more effort into this book I bet it would get in the rankings really soon.
I'm hooked it's interesting to me as I read it I'm very much captivated so much love I hope to see it evolve with enteristing lore, setting, and characters
Is a really good novel with a different vibe than other cultivation novels the author is Also a pretty nice dude I know him from the discord channel that he has opened and would recommend to those that like the novel to join us I have the role of direct disciple there with the name "Intil_O".???????The last part is just to complete the word count but is genuine.
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the characters are goodly written plot is very good, I am all for it. just don't drop the story it will make me angry and disappointed.also why do you have the same story uploaded three times?good luck
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Read up to chapter 21The story has just begun and so far it has really become very engaging. The writing quality is rather good and readable. Some small grammatical mistakes but nothing to really talk about. Theres also a lot of local terminology which if you are not a native of india or so you wouldn’t understand. Fortunately the author also understood this and helps with providing information either as context clues or in a “authors note”. As for the updates is has been pretty consistent with a chapter every day which a good amount of word count. The story does move along at a decent pace and some chapters theres no movement at all due to some important information being disclosed. As for the main character, I wont spoil much but he can be a type of dislike while liking him. Hes not the perfect person in a sense in where the things he does might confuse you but rather funny in some ways. The way he moves around the new world can be seem as arrogant but it can’t be helped considering he has many advantages. The character development is still proceeding since its only been 21 chapters but theres much potential as he grows to be more famous. There are some issues as to what his true goals are and why. Does he want to be number 1? Also why does he want to be number 1? In the first chapter you see his dreams and wants but not as to why he wants it or basically the motive. I would suggest giving the novel a chance for the first 5 chapters. Things start to pick up when he starts using his system abilities and his knowledge about the entertainment system.
Overall this book lacks nothing It has alot of creativity.The plot has been done really well And the charactera are pretty cool.Keep up the great work but please don't kill draiken he still has alot to live for ??
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