Space infront of them cracked behind their fragments The Demon Emperor plus the ten handpicked soldiers he chose were all standing.
After reading the first couple of paragraphs I can tell that the content of the original novel in Chinese uses imagery to great effect in the style of high fantasy. However from reading in English I can see that the person who is translating doesn't not do the subject matter justice. Writing in third person omniscient and using complex imagery is very difficult. We can see how the translator fell short, his is just doing the literal meaning translation instead without considering how the prose flows together in English. Instead we have a disjointed prose that jumps around presumably keeping up with the Chinese meaning but fails to live to the quality of the imagery or how the narrative flows. Please choose a translator that is a better writer
His slender fingers brushed against his forehead, he shook his head helplessly:
Really enjoying this story. I like the characters.
When I read the blurb I was like "I am sooooooo reading this!" When I started reading the book I couldn't stop. I commend your stability of updating.I also love the way you developed your characters.Well done!
HmmmHloo everyone I hope you guys alll like the story so far I am always Making necessary improvements in story so you guys can enjoy it...As you guys have already noticed I have changed the name of the storyThis will make the story more interesting as far as I can see so I hope you all love the story and as I have already announced volume 3 will be released after one week now only 5 days are remaining
Hi, shameless author passing by, I know the title is wrong spelling. I already updated it, but nothing happens. So I don't really know, and the cover is a bit messy, sorry for that I'm not an expert.... I hope you like my novel.
another great action novel from my favorite author. this novel is a notch higher than Double Moon. from the few chapters I've read, I'm already plugged into your world. if the double moon was a gem, this work is a superior gem: things are more explicit and exquisite. of course, let's not compare, both of them have their merits. please upload more chapters, I need to drown myself in them. Overall, nice work.
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
The story is amazing, smoothly unfolding, I've never got hooked to a sci-fi story before, keep it up. Also the scares in the story are very well written, and intriguing❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️