Jeinny23
Hey!Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *)We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
I love this story! MC is excellent and love the no hero complex and is evil but not villain, just out for himself. Writing quality definitely needs work. I’m confused half the time and have to reread sentences atleast twice since grammar is way off. But I really want to know if you’re still going to finish? I never see updates and have been waiting ages. I have reread multiple times but I want it finished atleast. Killing me with no ending and how slow is updating. Are you still working on this story?!
SO FUCKING BORING TO READ AND ANNOYING!! I THOUGHT MC IS FUCKING OP BECAUSE IT SAYS IN THE FUCKING SYNOPSIS. BUT I DIDNT EXPECT HE IS FUCKING WEAK!! HE IS IMMORTAL?? IMMORTAL YOUR DICK!!! YOU SHOULD CHANGE THE TITLE OF THE NOVEL TOO!! IDIOTIC, MORONIC, WEAK MC KILLING PROTAGINISTS.. AS IF!!!!!
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All in all, it's a great story.It has a good story, and I haven't found any big flaws.It has great characters with realistic personalities, many times better than you would expect from a novel here on Webnovel...The translation is spot on and I have not found any obvious grammatical errors, nor have I seen any awkward wordings (although I'm not a native English speaker). I am certainly recommending this novel.Review as of Chapter 18.
I really agree with loli why present a small girl is it an interest if it is sorry I'll pass. The story has great potential. So I give 4.8 stars.
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Recently, it says that the chapters have been deleted. The chapters will not load. Could the problem be solved. Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is one of my favorite novels it is not hyped like it should be it has the best world building and plot building in a novel I would recommend this novel to anyone who sees my review! (Could this novel have a 1000 plus chapters please! I would prefer a lot more!)
I'm in suspense dear author . This book is really mysterious, just what I need.???????????????????????????????????
Its good and all but where spider man updates dude? ???
