this is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will there be any yuri in the harem not a fan
I love this book. it's well written, it's mostly slice of life up to where I'm currently at which I'm perfectly happy with. there's some good spicy chapters. this is one of my favorite books currently and I will definitely keep reading it until it's completed. and if people start complaining about the content then piss off and read something else.
I only read few of it's chapters and I didn't expect that it's more interesting than I thought... I recommend to read this one. I really like it. hope there are more rewards to read more to it's chapters.
This story feels like it had some potential but it probably wasn't meant to be. The MC's personality and behavior is really childish and immature, the author already forgot to give him rewards for completing a mission, the translation quality and editing is pretty bad and it eventually get's tiring to read. Also the way that stats, leveling and skills are made really in depth will in most stories become too much and overly complicated where it gets hard to keep up with, both for the readers and the author. If you can do it well enough then it's good, but otherwise not so much.
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Its a good story and im very fond of it i like the beginning but i wish there was a bit more context in the beginning like the first two chapters even though im still at like chapter 8 but i was wondering if there will be any romance in the story ?
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It's good, but I would like it to go deeper about the MC, how he thinks, how his life has been, and a little more about the world he is in, what situation they are in
Teenage awkwardness, just the way I like it.Grammar has minimal errors, nothing another once over can't fix. Prose is good, and dialogue flows naturally. Might want to flesh out some of the single line dialogue IMO, just to give it a bit more spice.Keep on writing, I want more of this. ?
At the end of the first chapter, I would have told you that I really liked the narration, the details as well as the cleanliness of your writing and that the only thing I could criticize was the story because I don't like the genre.BUT! A few chapters later I can say that I was wrong, surprisingly you managed to make me interested in the story.I congratulate you and wish you a good continuation!
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