So am I the only person who thinks the MC is stupid.A candy drops from a little girl what do do you do???Oh i don't know maybe eat it ?But the story sound sound interesting anyway
genuine good story ??????keep it up.??????????????................................................................
Seriously. I was really enjoying this novel at first. But when you see the sane thing over and over and over again. It gets a bit boring. The plot progression is sooo slow even a snail moves faster than it. Author spends time mostly on irrelevanf stuff and stuff that actually matters gets skipped over. Am in chapter 200 and i havent seen any plot progression from chapter 50, it just reading d same **** over and over again. MC fights in virtual reality, MC wins, MC solves some science ****, he is a genius we get it, can we move on to the actual plot now, u said something about rebuilding an empire and nothing in the plot that has happened so far has even mentioned that instead they focus on irrelevant stuff like background characters we dont give two **** about. Seriously, start writing something that actually contributes to the plot and not something repetitive and boring
I like the concept of the story, but it’s become difficult to read.- Punctuation and grammatical errors are common, and the writing style overall can sometimes be confusing.- The story gradually becomes so convoluted with various conspiracies that it takes away from them individually. Also, the MC monologues internally about society too often and for too long; it gets boring and repetitive fast.- This is just a personal preference thing, but too many of the characters are terrible people. I’m convinced at this point that 80% of the people in the city are just sociopaths. Too often, their reasoning for treating others like metaphorical and literal punching bags is just because they can.
I can't get enough of this book…. I love this and I keep thanking for update
Thank you for writing this lovely book author.
love the book!!
its interesting
not exactly how I wanted it to end but it was still great
This book is amazing, and every time I read, it just give me the amazing feeling of wanting to know more about what’s gonna happen next. I love this book and it’s amazing, props to the author for an amazing novel.
a good time killer now at this time of pandemic, thanks for very interesting novels
I guess, like in the real world, the moon goddess works in mysterious ways as well. Thank you for making us fall in love with Luke! ❤️