'MELISSA!! WAKE UP!!' (Zack)
Interesting theme of magic and science. Now like Star Wars and Jedi. Good good good Hope its free to read, Good luck to your novel author. Bye. bye.
From the first chapter, you can tell that this book is something different. The writing quality is excellent, and the story advances steadily, not too fast and not too slowly. Most, if not all, characters have a good design and are introduced into the book reasonably. The main characters' powers just don't come from defeating monsters in a dungeon but also have a unique twist on it, which is very cool and versatile. In the future, there are many ways that I can think of that the main character can use to become stronger and more powerful if he wishes to do so. The world's background is alright. There are not enough chapters to give a valid opinion yet. Overall, I think this book deserves 5 stars, and it has a lot of potential to live up to.
the most obvious flaw i can see are the way author word things. It's like reading mtl while you're out of it from what i can tell, just without the inconsistency of names, titles and etc. The second thing i'll say is that my suspense of disbelief immediately collapsed because of the implications from a couple sentences that relates to the science and logic of your world (the best wording i can do currently to get across my meaning). And yes while this is a xianxia novel and you shouldn't judge it based on real world physics but this novel also started on earth and should at least make some effort at being grounded in physics (even if it's the physics of sci fi media)Tldr: Wording definitely needs a lot of work and make some basic research on science because it reads like the science comprehension of a conspiracy theorist or someone who has enough knowledge of the existence of those words but only a halfway there to basic comprehension of them and how they relate.
I love it. I can’t put my phone down. Author of you’re reading this please upload more chapters! I love how it’s slow pasted — seeing how the world building is being written is perfect
the novel is great for it's genre.only the romance part is disappointing,feels rushed like author thinks it's a must to get into romance for progression though it feels unnecessary. even the relationship feels forced as if the author had no other choice since she's the only female character available for the romance though they had an appearance only once in the story before the romance thing
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what a fantastic novel ???....... after reading so many novel this is 2nd novel i can say which has a class to it ..realy .....??
It has great potential... I cant wait for more chapters to be released. It can be a Gem and compete with top novels if the development is done well.
A copy paste of different work/novel author only changed the MC name and other characters, this is dumb.Rebirth: Hollywood by Soules King is already 160+ chapter, i bet this one will not much different
I dnt knw from where i should start abt this amazingly creative authors who never gave up on themselves .Other authors should learn from them .I salute to them. The characters are so strong and so beautiful in there own ways. This story have so many twist and turns believe me you guys won't be able to sit properly its like a rollercoaster.Last i only wanna say that...Some people can't function without negativity because bringing down others makes them feel better.
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