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Okay so let me just say this — the author knows how to hit you with a plot bomb and I am HERE for it. The entire setup of Sikong Sui being an Omega in disguise, the three-month training period, the pheromone suppressant routine, the affection level system — it's all woven together so tightly that every detail matters. And then BOOM. Vice dean walks in, announces Xie Ren's three-month mission, and suddenly everything Sikong Sui built up collapses in one sentence. The best part? Her reaction. She literally screams "NO!" in the middle of class. Not a subtle gasp, not a quiet protest — she SLAMS her hands on the desk and yells it out. And the system notification? +5 favorability. Because apparently being emotionally honest counts as attractive to Xie Ren. I love it. I love that she can't even control herself when the plot threatens to rip her away from her main objective. "Three months. The words felt like three needles, one after another, piercing Sikong Sui's ears." This line is everything. It's not just about Xie Ren leaving — it's about her MISSION being jeopardized. She has to complete something within these three months, and now her primary target is gone. The stakes just went from "keep your identity secret" to "what happens when you lose your anchor?" And Gu Shiyan watching all of this with that creepy little smile, asking if she's been "swapped out"? The man is clearly plotting something. His favorability is NEGATIVE ONE. NEGATIVE ONE. And he's still playing the sweet older brother role. This is going to be a disaster waiting to happen. Also can we talk about how Sikong Nian just casually drops that he leaked his top-tier Alpha pheromones last night like it's nothing? The man is hiding SO much. Every breakfast scene with him feels like walking through a minefield dressed in silk.
Parece promissor.
This book reminds me of Tensura, actually. Gotta keep this in lib lol
The plot has potential, the history and character development are acceptable but the writing/spelling quality is very low as English is not author’s native tongue. This story (and author) would greatly benefit from the use of a translator/editor or even spell check.
Great book, i'm in love with It, write more please!
A unique story! Haven't read anything like this one before. The world development, the writing style, characters...blew my mind.Highly recommended!!
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The novel is filled with excitement and suspense, taking the reader into a world of spiritual energy, heavenly catastrophes, and trials that challenge the characters on various levels. The narrative style from the perspective of “Aison Drakon” (the Ice Dragon) enhances the experience, making the reader feel the character’s journey intensely.
So, my first time on webnovel, and I come across this story. I do wish that the fl was developed just a bit better, but overall I rly like the story so far…
Good book, lots of interesting action and awesome writing quality the author has some good writing technics and abilities, I would like to see this book at the top
Kael system is very complex I can't understand it completely
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