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Awesome! I would suggest everyone to read this story! You will learn a lessom after you read this. I am still sad of what happen to Lia's Father. But I am not a spoiler hehe sorry. By the way author DhaRylLoner I'm still waiting for Book 2! This is so awesome story guys! No one can change my mind!
The grammar is so bad it's giving me a headache so I'm stopping here. I like the concept and it may have become one of me faves but the grammar and lack of care from the author to even try and fix it is killing it for me. It's one thing to spell a word wrong or to use the incorrect time but having missing words or phrases on top of all that just makes the sentences so annoying to decifer, that even my correct- as-I- read brain cannot keep up. That just means the writer didn't make an effort to even read the chapters a second time. Not being a native English speaker or having it as a second language is not an excuse for lasiness.
The problem is that you have to wait for the chapters... like there's no new chapter in the last month so you have to wait quite a lot. But the story its good and the MC is not an idiot who dosnt know how to use his brain.
idk i feel like the ppl who review thia very low really didn't read the story for the story. Besides the fact that the author ia using some random power trips to make the mc stronger without choice and some annoying af charcater i.e Spoiler: (*) the fact that he made an emotional scene about a grasshopper work pretty well speaks volumes on the novels potential.* the ice ability and that damn spirit who didnt let him choose to be in a contract
Games novel aren't my genre but I'm slowly trying to get into it. I guess if the author keep updating better and more chapters every day then I'll really fall into this genre. I really love the idea and concept that the author is writing in his book with games which is very hard in fact since it requires more creative than another genre, so I really hope to read more chapters.
Novel synopsis is a lie and following on that the mc gets his counter to 100% reflect but keeps taking full damage and the author keeps changing or adding random nonsense that makes me think he is high while writing this overall not a great novel
This is a good book; the story's premise is nice, the author's writing style is neat and understandable, and this is a system novel that is beingnicely carried out with a likeable and interesting Mc, good job author.
Love this very much! I started reading TKA few months ago after a friend introduced to me. Then watch drama. It was really great series! ???
just from the first chap i can teal this will be a premium book worth to read keep it up autor can't wait for more eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
It was going well until this novel ended up on the premium section. They used to update about 14 chapters a week. Now they still update 14 chapters a week but half of it is premium. They just cut the chapters in half and made us pay for the other half. This premium thing is nonsense.
This one is too good. A must read.......
I am deeply ashamed to say that I read this up to chapter 690. There was obviously flaws in the novel but overall the fighting was exciting to read. Also, the MC was interesting to say the least. He knew who he was well and had his own boundaries. However it started to degrade when the female lead arrived. At first it was subtle but as the novel went on it was simply emotional manipulation to help her parent to gain power. Also, this MC is the guy in most wuxia novels that spoil their daughters to the maximum and let them do what they like and have such horrible attitude. His way of raising his children is disgusting. He spoils his daughter too much and devalues his son and lets him become the protector and comply with her demands. That sort of mentality made me cut off my interest so quick. If that was not stupid enough, the daughter's crush was talking crap about him on his land openly and his daughter let him do it with her protection while his wife thought it was a minor thing and overlooked it. He failed as a parent. He is the worst parent I have read on Webnovel as a MC. His daughter has no respect for him at all, she even wanted to hit him and he was chill about it and said everything was his fault. I am done with this crap of a novel. I cannot believe I wasted so much. Also his wife is a such a bad mother, she made him apologize and orderes him make her daughter happy again. This might seem minor but what is the point being the strongest if your family are spoiled and rotten people no matter their talent? I wish he was single or at least didn't have children. It ruined his character. He knows the guy his daughter has a crush on has bad motives and even the daughter knows about it yet he promises him cultivation pills, techniques and his protection when he gains higher levels for him not to contact his daughter again.This is super retarded. I am so angry at myself for reading garbage. Absolute TRASH.
