PrimordialSeven
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Interest highly recommended please go to it without a second thought
First chapter actually got me so hook ! I love it. Can’t wait for more.
A nice story for some kingdom enthusiastic people
I think this is done quite well for an aspiring author. It is obvious that he cares for the world that he's building. I believe the author is trying to create a more original piece of work that tries to separate itself from common archetypes. Overall, I am both rooting for the author and the world they are trying to create.
This story has a lot of interesting things in it and the way the story flows is just right I really love this story I hope you continue to right the story and update it till the end?PS: Maraming salamat sa tuloytuloy na update ?
A great story if you don't want to use your brain or question anything and just relax whilst reading repeating stories of the mc shocking everyone, then traveling to a higher "plane" and the repeating, just as I repeatedly said repeating.A little bit of fiction(around chapter 400), the story is slowing down (instead of there being a single battle which was like 1 chap long, I think the last 50 chaps were just one big battle in which new people just randomly join, without a real explanation) i mean like yeahyou have the classical rail guns and robots but that's all the since fiction for nowlike I said not all too much fiction, our mc is just a stupid guy who just uses the system he was given once at the start to create a "perfect" world for life and then forgets it except for like three times when the mc actually had to decide somethingall the real thinking is done by the people of the world, which are actually not as intelligent as a boul of hot pizza but instead have the thought complexity of a 8 year old kidI think it's a great read to just shut your brain down and not think at allit's not perfect English but it's readableso yeah, that are my thoughts about this book
Never! Never! Never!
"You didn't know who they are? They are KARMA Real Life desu."
"Hei Ted, look what he have done," said the Man.
"Well Luffy is our Captain but you already know that, Zoro is the Swordsman of the ship and he's pretty much the Vice Captain but it's not an official thing he was just the second crewmember" Chopper says pointing at the green haired man with three swords who was currently talking with Usopp about how much he had changed over the two years.
"Is that…really you...Goh..." Akeno didn't get to finish her sentence as she became woozy and started to fall out of the sky, luckily for her a certain spiky haired teen carefully caught her as she was falling. "I'm sorry it went this way Akeno and that I wasn't here for you..." Gohan muttered feeling bad for what he watched.
