Now, I was genuinely intrigued upon reading the start of the novel. The main character was very interesting, and the world had a lot of potential. However, I feel like the author barely did anything with any of that.Enter Me! The Skillionaire Says In Parentheses is a story about a girl whos name I can't remember. A hyper-intelligent barely-sane experimental subject. Using her absurd prowess, she is able to very quickly rise in power in hopes to dominate the world.Writing quality is really good. There is a LOT of references in this novel, along with a fair bit of poetry. Far above average for this site. (5/5 stars)Story development is the first major flaw. While the story direction is interesting, it feels like the author creates a new plot point/direction with a lot of potential then doesn't do anything with it. This story has gone a little everywhere and has done next to nothing with any of it. Because of this, the story simultaneously comes off as extremely chaotic and extremely boring. (2/5 stars)Character design is decent. Above-average. The main character is definitely unique. The side characters are pretty good, but it doesn't feel like theres a whole lot of focus on some of them. (4/5 stars)World background. From the content alone, it's worthy of five stars. However the way they introduce is it is extremely annoying. It is a perpetually increasing stream of info-dumping. I find myself almost falling asleep listening to some random character ramble on about some obscure information that I doubt will be relevant. The author introduces too much information too fast. (3/5 stars)Overall, a novel good for it's world-building depth and writing quality, but not much else. Everything else can be described as passable but the story gets rather boring, especially later on. Parts of the novel feel like the author forgot the plot and focused exclusively on world-background. I give this novel 3.8 stars out of 5.
Good job.I would love to see more. Go ahead.
I like this book, very fascinating. it is the boy version of having a space without them being gay. I like where this is going, except for one big disappointment, he starts getting girls. his wife was fine and is very loyal, she was with him all this time why can't you ?... taking advantage, such a disappointment . why can't men be powerful without thinking about their d cks? author must be a single dog hmmpft big disappointment. ruined the book. he said he was going to change, it hasn't even been a month. then he goes...HAIYAH! DISAPPOINTMENT! KUYA ROGER IS DISAPPOINTED...
If you are a fan of descriptive stories then this story is for you. The author is praiseworthy when it comes to portraying imaginative details.The story also has a decent pacing although there are several grammatical corrections, all in all, the book is fun to read.
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I would like to start by saying the story is great and what I mean by giving it such a low score on writing quality is not to criticize the author but rather the translator because this iS machine-translation quality with minimal editing, which is unfortunate as I would love to read more; however with such low quality translations, it is headache inducing to read.
Just like great mo, master mo is also a great gamer that I love!I'm waiting to see what will happen next, but so far, so good. Good job author, need more chapter!
Author here,I'm trying to go through another phase of my writing This is another genre far different from the first book I'm writing Do well to tell me if it's going well