Writing this review after finishing the first volume (100 chapters).Positives:- Dark and gritty, with a mature writing style- Unpredictable - things don't always go the MC's way, or the way you're expecting- Refreshing - in a very oversaturated "system" genre, the author manages something very different - There is a decent balance of significant plot events and slice of life sections- The world grows with the MC, there aren't any overwhelming knowledge dumps - I personally enjoy the insight in the authors comments, demonstrating their thoughts, opinions and growth as an authorNegatives:- Can be confusing at times- As a weak MC, he spends a distressing amount of time injured- MC seems to lack any motivation outside of staying alive so far, spending most of his time following the whims of those stronger than him - hoping this will change at some point
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This novel is too great. Will vote how much as I can. The plot is awesome and this is a new journey to take part in. Well done author The plot is excellent and the writing is simple.Great work.
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Nice parody, man. I haven’t been reading or writing a lot, so I’m out of touch with a lot. Interesting to see this though. Time to jump into other trash.
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I like the story or plotline. it's good along with the idea but the mc is generic like any other western, Chinese mc. Not to mention, not even a few chapters later and racism is involved. If that wasn't there then I would have gave it a 4 star.
Found this book on kindle. I can't believe it didn't show up in my recommended reads here..... it's exactly the type of book I like to read.
I rarely find stories that interest me that way and hope that each chapter will be published. I still hope to see where Jacob goes and how they will build the world outside the city they are in.
great love it will be reading it all.......................................................................................................