ChiyoKobayashi
Cons, in my opinion:1. the idea is kinda fresh and unexplored, plus the first 20 chapters are a decent setup with a glimpse of the world. However, that's where I stop the praise for this, as the author or translator has a memory issue, forgetting the limitations, numbers, powers, and cultivation that they had mentioned previously. 2. the names and translation are all over the palace, meaning that one name can be used for several Chracthers, which can be headache inducing after a while.3. after the first 30 chapters, I feel like stuff happens for no reasons at all, like there is no logical reading for some of the mc actions and plot lines.
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A novel with great potential, minimal grammatical mistakes, writing needs work, paragraphs need to be a bit shorter (1 and utmost 3 sentences often), the pace is too slow I think, 1 fight with a few bandits shouldn't take 5 chapters in my opinion, and it could have been done in chapter and utmost 3.
Thank you for writing this. Keep up the good work. ^_^ Thank you for writing this. Keep up the good work. ^_^ Thank you for writing this. Keep up the good work. ^_^
An honestly entertaining story with a concept that I haven't heard before. Keep up the good work?.
I like the way you write it, easy to understand and simple. After the first chapter, i realised I turn the page already. Who was that person on the MC's dream? anyway, Keep writing :))
Depois de ler dois capítulos, percebi que este é um romance que vale a pena! Incluí-o na minha biblioteca para apreciar a leitura noturna, com uma xícara de chá e pão. Este é o máximo! Tão apreciado pelos bibliófilos! Bom livro à noite! Encontrar! 5 estrelas! Não vou escrever sobre os méritos e os possíveis erros.
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really great book, unlike most on this website, but please author, PLEASE, just update again, it's my favourite book, but get if you're just tired of it
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It's a great novel with a story I haven't seen before anywhere else.The characters are unique and stand out from each other which is good as it doesn't get repetitive.The main character isn't overly op at the start and has a normal increase of power over time, which I found was done skillfully as he was powerful in his past life and the author made it so he couldn't decimate everything on his arrival to his new life.
I've read 10 chapters so far and I'm already hooked. Writing quality is really good. I was able to imagine the scenes vividly. The plot itself induces a lot of possibilities which makes it unpredictable (in a good way). Characters are distinct and I didn't have any trouble figuring who's who during the conversations. The pace is smooth as well.Overall, a highly recommended book!
