Fallency
" Ohooo.. Blushing.. By the way.. I didn't tell anything like this or that. It was you who thought.. So there is definitely something like this or that"
" Umm...let's watch Titanic." Kyle said with wierd smile.
Opening the door, he found a large man guarding it. Seeing John, the guard wordlessly handed him a full face mask and stepped aside. John put the mask on and discovered he was standing in a large empty ballroom. Off to the right, he saw a doorway and heard the distant sounds of music.
"So little one do you have a name yet?" Rena asked trying to stay cheerful despite bringing up the long forgotten memories of her dead friends. The welp had calmed down at this point and was looking at her curiously from what he could tell she truly meant her no harm. "What is a name?" The welp had never interacted with another intelligent being before therefor it had never had to address its self to any one else. But know he felt an intense desire to have a name a strong and powerful one to reflect his might.
"But this looks expensive and new."
„Why can't they just go around it like everyone else" said Lifey coldly
Third Person POV:
Amisa was drooling. She was whispering to the other females that he wanted this one to ride, noting the bulge encased between his legs.
Just how foolish had he been? Albusflores couldn't think straight-- Tears started to fill his eyes.
The ghoul-like woman turned to look at her with an unreadable look in her eyes. Her face had yet to change from its deadpan expression, no matter how passionately she argued. It was incredibly unnerving.
I was going to start to read this book till I saw it had 11 chapters and that no more r coming out!!! If the author comes back and starts writing again then Ill start to read it.... I just hope that if u do come back that u see the book through and dont stop halfway through or whatever and finish the book!!
Excitement and enthusiasm will begin from now on. Be prepared for things that most of you will not expectI hope you will give me your opinions and support me to continue this story
