Fallency
Elsa:umuwi ka ng maaga ok?
Jessica:may sinasabe ka idiot?! Vanessa:(di lang pala mukhang palaka bingi din -_-)
Destroying a Super Guild, beating the high grade and cash players into submission. With overwhelming equipment, servants and player skill, thoroughly beating up the challengers, and the one who controlled the Avatar of the [Overlord] is wrapped up in mystery.
Dad?
"She implies that any move we make from this point forward will weaken us," replied Rider, "she is saying that they've already won."
"What do you think I can do?" he snapped, "He just melts my ice!"
*You prove something magical and strange with truth, not words right? With Yun's small movement, two people from two different countries really started talking about a different world!
"Kacy!" He called out for another maid. "Please bring Kalyn's clothes here."
Baldy nodded in satisfaction as he heard Nate's statement. It was just like what he said. A person cannot have a goal unless he sees the world in a broader view and those who have a goal without seeing the world might find their goal to be meaningless at the end of the day.
Receptionist:sure
Good read, i like how fast the author updates. Excited to see how AIs and humans scheme. The writing quality is good, knowing that the author is not a native speaker of english. As for story development, i find it quite fast. some of the unnecessary details are emphasized but not the bigger picture of the story. I look forward for the character development, I’ll write another review after a hundred chapter or so. Overall, this is a good story. Good job author!
"Leone, I don't deserve you. Why are you doing this?" Sinbad said dejectedly.
