Fallency
I shall be a shameless Arthur because you should read it and the story will be for the future so if he gets something in chapter 2 that means he could use it in chapter 60 it does not have to be used right away.
We're no strangers to loveYou know the rules and so do IA full commitment's what I'm thinking ofYou wouldn't get this from any other guyI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youWe've known each other for so longYour heart's been aching but you're too shy to say itInside we both know what's been going onWe know the game and we're gonna play itAnd if you ask me how I'm feelingDon't tell me you're too blind to seeNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give, never gonna give(Give you up)We've known each other for so longYour heart's been aching but you're too shy to say itInside we both know what's been going onWe know the game and we're gonna play itI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbye
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This is a poorly written system novel with a mish mash of different fantasy genera's.Most people have read a system/gamer novel or fanfic before so should under stand the basics. This system could of made a good novel if the author had stuck to one fantasy genera. As things are at the 4th chapter I chose to quite reading.Character designs are weak and the introduction to the main character felt forced and rushed.World building is lacking and story development seems to follow the standard chines web novel format. The main character seems to be mentally unaffected in transmigrating into a new world and seems to have gone all in.Translation Quality Score 2Stability of Updates Score 4Story Development Score 3Character Design Score 1World Background Score 1The total score2.2
If someone needs to read 100 chapters to START enjoying your story thats a bad sign.
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A man must overcome his death, even if he be gettin' isekai'd to a cliche Xianxia worlds, where grudges and obsession of revenge were running rampant. And he, as a typical young master, what should he do to cherish life? Easy! Make a bunch of MC template disciples and have 'em guard your safety!
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BS title it's not that really related to beast taming they don't really give that much importance to Pets. The MC doesn't even name his pets atleast once. The development pf the family is too vague, the MC is just keeps on annexing forces giving recorces to the family then rank up the family. He literally forgot the beast alliance he make after going outside the mountain range. The most annoying part is I read this novel because of the title and it doesn't really focus on that ??u200d♂️??u200d♂️
Generic trope of a 'could have been' entertaining novel if the MC wasn't such an unhonurable man. Resorting to killing just for the conveniance of getting money and techniques. Using a completely random guy for a 'play' and discarding him for no other reason to be not bothered. He could've just said "let him go." and it would have been over.
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