it's somewhat darker than most things I read but it has really good character development and worl building, I can't wait to see what the power system will look like in the future
Hey, i read the first four chapters from your work, though it’s still ongoing I can see it’s potential and it was a really good read. Hope you see it to the end and keep up the good work! :))
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I don’t nornally get sucked into a book in this genre but I found it difficult not to keep reading this. And got kind of bummed when I realized there were no other chapters yet.
Hello, Author again, it is officially chapter 100, my first milestone! at first, I doubted my novel because I'm new and didn't know much about writing properly so, now! (Though still improving) I'll definitely recommend you read the novel, I don't know how my novel is because my head is filled with spoilers so, if you could tell how it is it'll help me a lot so, Thank you! ✌️
I read the raws. MC is really foolish (he is a child, so that can be his excuse, but he is supposed to be from a noble family, and they supposedly get good training from childhood). The next things I mention all happen in the first ten chapters, so can't really be considered as spoiler.He sold all the assets of his family for loaves of bread or small amounts of pocket change. He has a good teacher who helped him in his need, but he neither consults him about his doubts nor asks for advice. He is greedy and easily led into the plans of others who want to use him (the most stupid thing is he wanted to save up food, so he bought lots of bread with his first gold coin, and then was so surprised when the bread got spoiled after a few days. I mean, what do you expect- it's a perishable food- buy rice instead, or wheat, or corn- even foolishness should have its limits).
I loved the writing style of author. I've started reading this book and can't stop reading. I recommend the book for everyone. Wish you best of luck author❤️
Cap -56- The story is light, good to read, has great characters and don t have repetitive situations, I really recommend it. But I also notice that the author sometimes exaggerates in the description of scenarios and situations (he looks like an old man telling a story... he rambles!) ---------------- Author, me too I would recommend changing the cover, because despite being beautiful and well made, it gives us the idea of a natural medicine book, not a fantasy book (I don't say this as a review, just because I like the novel and think it has content enough to become popular)
I kinda enyojed the story. Its true that it was a bit too slow paced but still i endure it and read till chap 365 but i couldnt continue. MC personality is something i dont dislike except of him being to discrete for too long but his simp side is something i could not accept anymore. At first it was ok but as chaps went by its increased more and more to the point chap 365 was my limit before puking so i had to stop. Still if you are okey with this 2 points, the story is enjoyable over all
Well, the book is well-written. The only thing that bothers me is because the MC is totally inexperienced but of course he can also gain that, hoping for the story and the MCs stable growth.