Story: 5 ? Plot: 4 ? Cliche: Low but still present. World: Unique.
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One of the best I have read.The pace is moderate, and his personality his like a actual villian.I like how he slowly breaks the heroines?.Though i would suggest the system to given him some ability, like some mark appearing on the heroine's body, when they fully submit, could be a choker tattoo on neck, or in thier abdomen.And some kind of meter which can tell thier obedience and affection/hate.
WARNING IF YOU DONT WANT TO WASTE YOUR MONEY.After reading past chapter 600 I would say that the novel, which starts out horribly and gets good, reverts to trash. It absolutely looses the Golem focus and becomes the stereotypical garbage with a moronic MC, who is going to be so so tough when he grows up, an academy arch with all the usual trimmings with no support for the MC other than trying to kill him. Yes, this gets his undying loyalty. If you want a book about a golem mage, this isn’t it, now the golems are not even mentioned, I have wasted so many power stones so decided to warn future readers.
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I don't like reading this genre so I don't undersrand why I am so hook reading this!So beautifully written and so very interesting! Can't stop reading the moment I open it!
Hoping for fast updates. Seems like jay aslan story but hoping that this one won't get stuck ........,............,.....................................,
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Okay so I need to talk about this scene where Jiang Mingyue literally SLAPS both Wen Ning AND Luo Mingzhong in the same breath. Like. Who does that? And more importantly, WHY didn't I do that five years ago?? The moment she slapped Wen Ning first — and then immediately backhanded Luo Mingzhong — I literally screamed at my screen. This is the woman who spent years swallowing every insult, every dismissal, every 'you should be grateful.' And here she is, hands still numb from the impact, and her first instinct is just... more hitting. But what got me was Luo Mingzhong's reaction. He doesn't even defend her. Not once. He shows up and his first words are 'are you causing trouble again?' Like she's the problem for getting assaulted. And then he has the audacity to ask HER to apologize to the guy who tried to rape her, all because he's thinking about Commander Wen. Commander Wen. Always Commander Wen. As if the dead guy's legacy is some kind of universal excuse for being a terrible human being. And Fan Xiaojun — oh my god, Fan Xiaojun. Three meetings and this guy shows up with a witness statement and a leather jacket and actually PROTECTS her. Meanwhile Luo Mingzhong, who she's been with for FIVE YEARS, can't even look at her without seeing her as an inconvenience. The contrast is so sharp it hurts. One man in a military uniform full of 'righteousness' who treats her like garbage. Another in a leather jacket who looks like a gangster but actually acts like a decent human being. The author really isn't even subtle about it. I also need to address Wen Ning's internal monologue at the end. She's literally thinking about hiring someone to KILL Wen Dazhuang because he's useless to her now. This woman is a menace to society and I love that she's not even pretending to be nice anymore.
What to say about this authorThe author knows how to describe its character just a little bit of grammar mistakes but I am a carefree reader. I just enjoy the story and go along with it. So if you are looking for war & military fiction you should read this one. I know it's like 2 or three chapters now but the author has worked up really to rewrite the story on the basis of people's critique. So, keep up the good work dear author.
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