Interesting book. When it started I was rather cautious with rating it. Now after few hundred chapters I can say it’s one of my daily books. Somewhat humorous, not really fast paced, somewhat generic world, but it’s one of the better books to read right now anyway.I give it 7/10.
The way the author forces in flash back in basically every chapter is seriously annoying. It just breaks the flow of the whole story and makes it all seem awkward just to dump in info, and sometimes the info is useless. I rather you make a few chapters at the start to do the info dumping, and provide the background of the world than forcing bits and peices of it everywhere. In general, the plot is progressing slowly, with some bs here and there but its ok if you want to pass time
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Bad story the MC in this story will always meet more girl that beautiful got nice body and in love with her, And when the girl like the mc bammm the mc just like iam not mean for you so you can just f4c..k with the other guy that love you to, And then the girl like are you sure? Mc Say sure, and then the girl live hapilly ever after with the other Guy, And wait is the story finish like that? Nope you are wrong because the mc will find some girl again **** with her and you now what bam all that mc efort to f4ck the girl get reset because he rescue the girl that open her leg with another guy, is that end of story whopps you got punked, because the story not done yet the wife of the mc get gangbang with 3 guy when the mc got beaten up with the people that raped his wife, heh ooopss soory forget to mention the apps that mc got hmmmm....... is that because i am forgetfull? Gues again its because the author not even mention any use for the system, like hell what the use of the system that will let the mc got overpowered just let the mc got more pathetic than he already are because what ? Gues again.. ....... He got punished by the god in his world in 10.000 years he life in his world, wkwkwkwk you think this is all that mc got all the girl that he love? Nope this story is alll about how you will life when you get the god is pised with you and that all the story about..... I realy recomend not read this story if you just want to get light story because this story will just get you pissed of the more you read it, But if you like the story that i listed above then conggrats because you are realy good person that will sacrifice the girl that you love to another person that the girl not really like i respect you all
Here as a friend to the author. I may be biased coz I want to help him out, but I am trying my best to be critical. Coffee calls it "literary metafiction" all the time but I call it "magic mystery" for its attempt to bind fantasy with mystery together, specifically detective fiction.Each and every chapter, the plot thickens and more mysteries are waiting to be uncovered. Good book! I recommend it for mystery lovers who want a tinge of fantasy. Or the other way around, lol---Writing Quality: 4 - Unique linguistic skills. You know the author has passed his grammar and has studied how to write fiction. Exceptionally good at transitions! A bit nerdy though for the tattered references. From Marvel to nonfiction about chaos theory to anime I can't tell them all!!!!!!!!!! - Coffee likes X-Men and Doctor Strange.Stability of Updates: 5 - Has plans to update daily and then some, I can assure that.Story Development: 3 - Downsides! I understand its literary fiction, as he says the pacing is more dragged than normal. But I'll be frank and say it has an unhealthy development after Memento Memori (catchy chapter name, I like it!) The direction its taking doesn't feel like it will go back to the problems of Mikoto Arakawa, the person who is introduced as the main heroine. I'll be waiting thoughCharacter Design: 4 - Characters are built throughout the novel. Some characters aren't given love though, like introducing one at the start of the chapter only to not appear in the following chapters. The Light Mage rival who's named "Kuroko" (black child), for example, where? - Has a memorable sense with names. Shirayuki, the protagonist, means Snow White. The twins Amaterasu and Tsukuyomi are based from the Japanese gods of sun and moon. The Seven Gods might be hard to figure out but when mentioned they are the shichifukujin (seven fortune gods). World Background: 4 - Magic school in modern Japan. Mages are a different race of people separated from Humans. Mages and Humans are enemies. Simple. It only becomes complex when you consider individuality but I think that's normal.
I like this plot. Good one... Where are the rest chapters? Make sure to update timely basis. Make her pregnant and also his aunt and childhood friend. Make them leave this realm and take his 4_5 wives with him and kids??????
Instead of some op Brain super hacker do what he wants you get mc so boring that you feel pity and boredom. Only withstand 19 ch and I go kill myself for such wasted time after writing this. 2/10. Word suck mc suck more game elements suck the greatest.
This Novel is quite good and interesting.Among recent Trial this is one of best.I hope this get pick..it is worth your time and money.Most Important this Novel have cats..and that Cat is Halo
hey, guys please support this book !! this author's work is amazing .I recommend this novel, keep it up, author.????????????????????????
It started with many plot holes and he says mc is 1000 years old mentally ,but does not act like one. he's just another otaku ,dumb, neet protagonist. And there were many this ignored in the starting of novel. A good start is only required to decide if I should continue. I know many will not agree.
One of the best books I ever came across. The story, the plot and twist etc