Trash. The idea and translation are garbage. If the maids are op, then why are they maids? Why are they following the MC? The system is fine, but the worldbuilding is simply garbage.
ok, honest review: it's a good read, the MC is not the naive type, dumb and with a sense of heroics, he already lived a life where he saw the evils of the world so we are not going to worry mostly about character development, he has a logical golden finger although there are many mysteries but not very important for now but uncomfortable .in conclusion it is a good recommended reading with its parts of lemons, I hope it continues to rise more.
This is my review from the previous version of the book.The story seems well so far, I hope you can stay constant with uploads and don't drop. Please don't make this a harem. Also can you not follow the gamer's mage way, but if you do make it original.
For updates stability Heavens Clan gets a five
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The novel was really great and the flow was good. I really like how he was treated at first. He was like a lunatic trying to prove that he was a cultivator then shocked the whole planet when he proved it. Yeah, just go for it! Write more chapters!
I’ll try to make this quick.Takes place in modern China. MC’s goddess of a sister wants to become a superstar. Qin Ze, a mediocre student overshadowed by his sister, obtains a system that allows him to receive points through missions and pay for learning skills instantly.If I were to compare this to another novel, that would be I Am A Prodigy. He’s not as OP in learning skills, but the way he uses his skills in different situations is very similar. And also, the face smacking with those skills.A large feature though is his sister. Much of the story so far has tons of banter between him and his sister but I’m not a big fan.His sister is a peerless beauty with a alluring body. And the author doesn’t forget to mention that every time she appears. They also make it a point that they might not be biologically related in the opening chapters. But that’s not the biggest problem I have. The problem is her personality and how she acts. She’s extremely lazy and forces Qin Ze to do chores, cook food, accept her demands, and more. She’s pretty unreasonable and selfish and Qin Ze just accepts it. She orders him around like a servant. He doesn’t always take it but does most of the time because of the way they were brought up. She is 25 and he is 22 btw. I could continue describing my dislike of her but I’ll stop it here.The chapters are pretty long which is good but I feel events are dragged on for longer than they should. A basketball game? Make it 4-5 chapters and make sure the netizens are just dumping on the MC until the end.And although you think the story focuses on helping his sister become a superstar, that becomes more of a side show. We mostly see Qin Ze get missions, learn skills, and banter with people. Then sprinkle in some developments about the superstar stuff. It’s more about turning the MC into a not so mediocre person.Translation was pretty good. Didn’t spot many mistakes.Probably won’t keep reading.
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A few bits of information if you even want to proceed with reading this novel :(-) MC is slow to adapt and he is a “wimp”, meaning if you came here for an actual villain this isn’t the novel you want or if you came here for an intelligent and calculating MC also do not read this book(+) The premise of the story is interesting where you get this fantasy world with Gods, Adventurers (Players), Classic ranking systems like Silver, Gold, Platinum(*) The characters are decent, the novel is set in first person and thus heavily relies on dialogue and interactions for you to know more about them which unfortunately means World Background takes a few points off despite an interesting setting due to the fact that it is strictly first person with lack of early-novel exploration events(*) Writing quality is decent for a webnovel nothing much to say though the main issues are typos which isn’t that bad====••===••===••===••===••===••====Writing Quality : 3.5/5 nothing crazy but not horribleUpdating Stability : 5/5 its still updating with a good amount of chapters to read[Slow-Paced] Story Development : 3/5 its ok, the MC does get around to doing things but its nothing much and at the moment hes still within the starter area Character Design : 3/5 not a personal fan of the MC but it does make for more “danger” when it comes to him going outWorld Background : 4/5 unexplored for the most part but has a lot of potential ================================Tips for the author :- It helps to switch between the MC and the people he has interacted with in order to develop characters and the world more easily and it also lets us take a break from prolonged firstperson view which can be exhausting and boring to read- Fix typos- Lots of world potential and character potential so capitalize on it
this story had a lot of potential but it seems the author is writing it wrong. the author seems to not have planned out the story and just keeps adding whatever he wants even though it ruins the story he set at the start. *SPOILER* for example, he first describes the female MC as a helpless person but later says how she would have been able to defend herself. its really inconsistent and ruins the flow of the story. as for how to fix it, it seems the only way is to start the story again.
after reading more than 300 chapters all I can say is, bad. extremely bad the mc is always manipulated and is a extremely idiotic person with a extremely bad personality.