Pukha_Jimo
Seems like a really cool hidden gem but before I start reading it, I have one single question.1. What is the character of protagonist? Is he evil or good. If any how much and where does his bottom line lay.
I like it because it's uniq and common at the same time. I love the storie and I hope thet it wont be dropted any time soon. I recomend it to people for casual read.
Personally I loved the story. op isn't crazy op or gains incredible powers every 10 chapters. a bit of a slow development with ops powers. plot moves a bit slow but the in-between and small stuff are fun to read. However it seems the author or translator has dropped it. full month of no releases or news. gg I loved this book
Hello, Deathilim here. I'm gonna be shameless as heck but I'm gonna put my review on five stars. Well, that aside this is my first ever written story! I've been interested in The Novel's Extra's concept and planned to make one of my own. Except, this is not plot driven for the most part but character driven.I put more emphasis on the main characters rather than the overall plot, however, there's still plot. Just don't expect it to be grander or over the top amazing!Writing Quality — I know some eenglish here and there, but not a native english speaker. Please pardon my mistakes in writing.Story Development — The start will be neither fast not slow, atleast that is what i envision. I will lay out the important things at the first few ten chapters and then you shan't worry about the pacing.Character Design — Eh, most of my characters are inspired by many different novels. But the main character is an empty vessel, his character at it's core is empty. Updating Stability — I will update atleast 1 chapter a day, if I don't, I will upload 2 chapters next day.World Background — Pretty, uh, mediocre? This is a magical world set in a modern futuristic setting. Earth, of the future has converged all of it's continent forming the “Pangea” or supercontinent. There will be other races too!Well, that's all for the most part! Thank you, please leave a comment and criticize this work of mine.
This author basically plagiarized “The king of the Battlefield”. Changed a few but alot of it are the same word per word
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This is relly a well written novel. I don't mind giving all the power stones i have. It's worth reading if u like novel abot cultivation. The character development is also good.
The protagonist asked the beautiful lady if she wanted some fuk. The beautiful lady said yes. Thus, there was some fuk....,,,,,,.......,,,,,,......,,,,,.
This novel is just as good as your other ones. However I hope you keep updating it!!!!......................................................................................................................................................................
well, allway's the best. if i say in every aspect, the story line and how connect just......astonising. and well also the way he represent the story itself. kinda also intresting not chit chat and other bla bla you what i mean like some are just way too lenghty they just explain to much the other stuff so.....this is the best i can say about this.....so exccel..
A different take on mystical realism. World building takes its time which is good, as it doesn't feel rushed. Characters feel more real in most settings.
I like the story but the time skip and super fast leveling if it continues will make me drop the story. The reason I like stories with systems in the first place is the grinding and practice in between goal and watching it all come together at important moments.
