"It looks like everyone is here. except for Glev. Where the hell is the guy?" Elou asked.
Mysterious, anime like fighting and detailed descriptions. I really like the beginning and earlier chapters, introducing the world and stuff seems really good. Especially the glutton and the many variations of it. The world building is good, taking a mix of post apocalypse and monster (from what I deduced). You would find this extremely likable if you favor dark and full of monsters and struggle story. One thing that is really rare and interesting is the use of candy system lol
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Loved the story's background and setting as well as the characters I read. The author has a vivid imagination and has created a world for us to enjoy! Great Job!
I decided to delete my last review to update, this story still holds my undying respect and features what I love most, this is a great read and I would recommend to everyone I know… while I speak great things of this novel, I suggest you give it a read yourself. Some other great things in this story is the characters and how they each there own aura, that makes you care about them.
So I have read up to chapter 100 and I finally have decided to write a review. Here I will list the pros and cons that this story has and hopefully give the author some constructive criticism to further improve his writing.PROS1. Characters seem somewhat well written unlike some Chinese novels where every character seems like an arrogant brat.2. Story premise is actually quite enjoyable to read.3. MC is enjoyable to read about in my opinion.CONS1. Author seems he can't display characters emotions correctly yet. For example, in the elemental test, the MC gets a godly score with the ability to manipulate 6 different elements, and yet he doesn't even seem happy in the slightest. It seemed like, to me at least, that the MC was trying to score an impossible score. 2. Detail is mediocre at best. For example, going back to the elemental test, when the MC got tested there was no suspense, there was no detail on what the MC was feeling, there was no detail in anything he was seeing either. It just seemed like he was a robot devoid of any emotions.3. The pace is wayyyyy too fast. It seems like one chapter he is traveling to some castle or city, and next chapter it's already 3 days in the future. Like I understand if the author was trying not to bore people with unnecessary content, but my man you gotta slow it down sometimes. Honestly, this book could be one of my top books in webnovel if the author fixed up these mistakes in the writing. I hope once the author gets more experienced in writing, he will come back to this story and completely restart it. Yeah I guess it's a naïve hope, but you can let a man wish. Thanks for taking the time reading this long and boring review, much appreciated. Thanks to the author for writing this novel, and it seems to me a lot of people enjoy it aswell so good luck!
Trash Novel!!! How can the author mess up in the first 10 chapter. The story is full of holes and to fill those gaps the author created more ambiguities.
As the story progresses reader have an enthusiasm to know what is happening next......great novel....this is merely 20 th time I am reading this...very interesting..
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Promising premise, hope you keep it up. You won't truely get many readers till you have atleast 25-30 chapters to show that you are actually dedicated. I know personally I don't read novels before 25 chapters just cuz I dont' want to find a novel I like and then see it dropped within first 10 chapters. Anyways, keep up the good work, and i'll come back around to read this once a few more chapters are out.