DarkCyan
But only the risk takers win big
Update more chapters
Yo, chill the fuck out, let the readers decide if they wanna read it or no.
At the very least you could put an "IMO" after every sentence you wrote.
Try not to completely influence readers here.
Go put it in a review.
BTW, IT gets better( ig around 100-250ch)
I see you fellow Daoist are also practicing the great Dao of stacking I shall proceed to read this while multitasking to truly ensure my brain is off
I like transmigration story like this but there might be some improvement for author. For example the first was knowledge consistency from each characters such as how the other non-transmigrate character know the doomsday event like monster siege, doomsday artifact items, etc. when MC was the only human that just transmigrate, where the knowledge these people come from?? Heck even with the transmigrate MC knowledge he doesn't even remember that the Undead City was in their city hospital. If he was truly transmigrate hero, he should collect all these "strategical history" that he knew from before his transmigrate life and made it his collection. Next was plot consistency such as the doomsday just have been so many days not even a week but there are some faction and ruins that have been establish from long before doomsday and already a mass to join their faction with so many people. There were also some historical ruins that already there from previous era?? What this even mean?? Overall even we reader love to be fooled fool by fantasy story but author doesn't need to insult our intelligence.
Its a really nice book. Though the author should work on the story development. I like the comedy between Gale and the. MC. The grammar needs a little work,including the action scene. The updates need to come regularly. All in all I can't Wait to see where This book is heading to..
I like this book. good job??. update more chapters
Good novel fits my taste, dialogues need a bit of work but all things considered, it will attract more readers if you remain consistent. Looking forward for your work.
Sorry, I'm Done. Won't be reading this anymore. Now you want me to pay you $30 a month to read LN on webnovel.com? NO thanks I can get Cable TV for that price. Or i can get NetFlix for $10 a month. Far Far better price than this. And Don't tell me they release non-premium chapters since there hasn't been a single one in over 2 weeks starting after chapter 257.
Is this a gay novel?
Another fabulous book by this author. I simply love reading your books. I am eagerly looking forward to more of your works! Keep writing.... :) <3 xoxo
will there be an update soon? I know you haven't been feeling good, but I thought I would ask!
