I like the story, but some parts are edited poorly and the story jumped around a bit. I think this would be a great book if the author could touch it up a bit
Very interesting. Nice twists and turns
good book to read
Nice story and plot..Good job Author
Hello guys I would like to thank all those who have taken out their time to read my story, this is my baby, and I am pleased to find that many people love it.
P.s I have more for you guys love you and I also love how my author mind was churning for the best it makes me want to cry
Awesome writing. Keep it up!
when is the next update ?
Will there be anymore chapters? If so what is you updating schedule? I love this series btw!!!
let's help this book to be picked for serializing
One of those books that can suck you in with the well timed cliffhangers, but does anyone else find the ML’s lack of self awareness frustrating? Every time he says something stupid like ‘why is she so upset?’ I kinda just want to flick him in the forehead and say ‘really?!’
If you want to be mad for a while and then disappointed, go ahead and read this book. Lots of grammar errors.
I'm somewhat disappointed that I read this early as it has fewer than 10 chapters, but I'm completely hooked on the story. The protagonist's typical character transplantation into a BL (yaoi) game trope really resonates with me. I genuinely enjoy it and hope for more translations. I'll definitely return once there are more chapters available. Oh, and by the way, I'm new to reviewing, so I'm not sure how to adjust the star rating yet. ??