I think you should mention mc in the real world too, and cut relationship between church because her father is using him and restraining his potential!!
If you love novels like Monster Pet Evolution this is for you it's a lot better than others of this type mainly because there is not skirt chasing MC, he is not OP, his single advantage is his ability to check the Grades of Pets before making a contract with them something that others have to do first to be able to check the Stats of Pets and he thinks like a normal human(something rarely seen nowdays). The quality was good for the first 39 chapters after it becomes worst but not so much. Give it a try.
For a beast novel, this one is really good, much better than most of them. But it reminds me of KR novels. Is it a KR novel? heh.Overall nothing super amazing but those who like taming beasts novels will probably like this one.
Nice...finally found a story that could potentially be one of the greats on this app. I was reading chapters here or there and boring!!!! Lol???? but i think this will be a great and interesting read that ill become hooked for sssuuuuuuuurrrrreeeeeeee??????The summary makes it entertaining...maybe????the reviews are also significantly all good. I've gotta read for sure!!!! ❤❤❤
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Reading first 20 chapters lowered my intelligence, so i wanted to see how many people sticked to the story till the latest chapter. Not many and can't say i expected anything else. At the start it was all going good, but then that little girl appeared and i kinda knew it would go downhill from now on. It seems to be theme or more like an obsession with little girls that chinese novels have. They are always there to make the plot retarded to force MC into situation he wouldn't be in. It is always goes like this: 1. MC finds a little girl by sheer coincidence and out of all the kids that are dying before him you know he will save her. Not only because in the pandemonium somehow a kid voice was able to reach the MC, but also because the kid was crying while advertising her name which just so happens to MC dead sister name. What a coincidence!! Fuck all the other kids and people now he'll do everything to save her, even though he's out of shape, crippled, below average intelleigence guy with no foresight. 2. That little girl is very special. Apparently this one was 1 of 9 in the whole world, what a coincidence!! that our MC encountered her. 3. Suddenly MC will go to any lengths for that little girl because why the fu*k not, he has already died for her why not 100 times again and she's a kid who he fell in love for after 2-3 dialogues, can't abandon her now. Now this unhealthy nonsensical obsession will drive the future plot. 4. That little girl then will become the weak link/target of people who wants her 1 in a billion physique, or maybe when he's facing a god or some other sh*t, and her power will help him. Thank god he found her by coincidence in the start. 5. Apparently by another innocent coincidence he encountered a zombie way over the starter difficulty and got mortally wounded and infected while protecting the little girl and survived by just a sec again by sheer coincidence of girl having some sort of power and double personality which she conveniently wasn't able to use before, but did so now. All these coincidences in just a few chapters. Now as a seasoned chinese novel reader you already know that MC will spend his time protecting that little girl, wasting resources on her, and maybe eventually getting in relationship with her. What? You though little girls in chinese novels were for some Innocent reason? 9/10 expect it to happen. In the last scenario she was killed.MC is a retard as well. He apparently thought it was enough to prepare for doomsday with just stocking guns and food. Even an idiot would've noticed that they need more than that to survive, especially as a cripple. Was he thinking of just camping in car with limited resources that will eventually run out? Base of operation? Future food procurement? training? A google seach on how to survive apocalypse? Taking measure of system capabilities? A common guy would have searched the whole system store in his free time just out of sheer curiosity, but MC didn't. He only knew enough for plot's sake that he could buy space rings but didn't knew that he could buy skill cards and being a retard that he is, brought a car without ever thinking his retarded ass can't drive cars or even use guns to save his life. All these coincidences, and mc being a retard are just signs of bad writing by author's who can't think of better plot progession devices so they just use what everyone else is using. How is this story better than others infinite stories where Mc is in apocalypse with a little girl and a system? This one has apparently has a perverted system of some sorts for lulz i guess. Totally won't get old in 10 chapters. Good luck with your future works author.
Great story, i just wish it was complete with 1000 chapters so i could binge read.
A really interesting plot it's a shame for the Writing quality, there are tons of typos and errors, also the punctuation is a mess. The story has lot of potential and a unique plot but you really need to improve the writing quality. Like this it's not entertraining. I would love to read it with an improved English. Work hard Mr. author, you have all the right credentials to write something incredible.
Obligatory shameless author moment! ?Reviewing your own book is kind'a awkward, so I’ll keep it simple. If you’ve got any questions, feel free to ask in the comments!"What’s this book about?"A programmer wakes up in a brutal, game-like world where survival is the only rule. No respawns, no tutorials—just instincts and grit."Will he be overpowered?"Not really. He’ll get stronger, but every fight is a struggle. No one-shotting bosses here."Will he really be alone the whole series?"Guess you’ll have to read to find out. ?
A good novel please continue !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Really racist. His ultimate goal is to spread Chinese civilization to the whole world and force it into their throats much like what liberalism did. He wants no Christmas or any religious ceremonies, only the Chinese new year celebration so its even worse than what liberalism did. He does not want to destroy Handan orgo members because they are Chinese and must uphold china together even tho they are trying all they can to destroy him. The funny thing is China now is using a western ideology that has nothing to do with Chinese civilization the mc is pushing. Every country he occupies he enforces "Chinese ideology" which in reality something like that is impossible.
The chapters are the longest of any story in Quidian I've seen so far! I like that! So far the story is great and I'm into it! Also I haven't noticed being annoyed by bad grammar so the translation is among the best on this site.