nothing interesting yet will wait for more chap to put a good review
Hi, just a message from the author. This is my first book in a while. I plan to update daily through summer so please feel free to leave reviews or comments, Thank you.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Uhh has the novel been canceled? because we'd very much like some more... the grammar quality doesn't matter as much anymore as i'm now a definite fan and i'm starting to miss reading this...
"He had never imagined that being acknowledged by a friend could feel so incredibly joyful." I need to just sit with that sentence for a moment. THAT is the entire Sasuke Uchiha character in one line. One. Line. Let me tell you about the mask scene because I CANNOT stop thinking about it. Sakura just... casually puts a rabbit mask on her own head, a fox mask on Naruto, and a black cat mask on Sasuke. And Sasuke—stoic, proud, brooding Sasuke—reaches up to adjust the crooked black cat mask, considers taking it off, and then just... doesn't. He slips his hands into his pockets and keeps walking. The author writes: "for some reason, he lowered his hand in the end." For some reason. FOR SOME REASON. He's never worn anything like this before and he's keeping it on because he doesn't want the moment to end. And Naruto! The boy who used to be isolated and hated is now walking with a fishbowl, eating cotton candy beside Sakura, and thinking "He was no longer alone, so he wouldn't be afraid anymore." This is character growth that doesn't need a training arc or a power-up. It just needs two other people to decide he belongs. The palm tap between Sakura and Sasuke before their exam fight gave me chills. They've sparred before, sure, but this is different. It's the first time they're acknowledging each other as equals in a real confrontation. "Do your best." Two words and suddenly the air changes. Even Choji stops reaching for his chips. But the most devastating character moment is Itachi carrying sleeping Sasuke home. Sasuke wakes up and his first thought isn't about his clan or his revenge—it's about his friends. "My friends..." He almost says Naruto isn't his friend, then catches himself and swallows it. The boy who spent his whole life defined by hatred just... has friends now. And Itachi, the monster, the tragic figure, is the one carrying him home. The roles are completely inverted and the author doesn't even comment on it. Just lets it breathe.
Keep it up We Liverpool are gonna rise Up!!!
Writing Quality seems to have improved from when I started his other book, updating stability is amazing, there’s only 5 chapters out so I can’t really comment on the others so just take 4
Interesting start, can't wait for more. Here's to hoping you'll win the WPC.. .. .. ... ... .. .. .. .. .... .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
What happened to the chapters? It just stopped updating after a while??? Why??????????????? This here to make tge word count ushendjddjdjjdjdjdjddnjddjdjdjdjjdjdjdjddjdjjddjjdjdhdhffjjfndbdjsjdhdhdhdhdhdhhddhdhhddhdhdhhdhddhdhdhdhhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhddhhddhdhdhshshsshshshshshshshshdhdhdhdhdhhddhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhhdhddhdhhdhddhhddhhdhddhdhdhdhdhhddhhdhddhdhhddhdhhddhhdhdhdhddhdhhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdddjndnddjjdjdxjdjjddjjddjdjdjfjdjfjdjfjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjbdhdh
passable time waster. however, it's quite annoying that this is one of those "reincarnated former martial expert" MC that act like a kid... the way he's been acting so far, his naïvete... lets just say it would've gotten him killed if he regained his past status (royal knight, protector of the king)