5 stars for being unique in terms of using the Indian cultural settings which is rich in culture and history, instead of the usual xianxia/wuxia in eastern fantasy.
more chapters pleaseMore chapterssssssMore I need massssPlease update.?????Waiting for update When will it arrivewaiting .. and more waiting .. and it seems it never ends..
Amazing story. The most unique thing about this story is that it is written by a Pakistani and written in Pakistani style. Good luck author in writing more novels in future
This is a amazing book that is also very funny. The MC is the most ordianry person in the world but he suddenly gains a speical power and become unordiary.
Good story! But in my opinion, the mc is getting too strong to fast. Mc isn’t even getting used to his power. Without a good foundation, one is doom to fall. This isn’t the story for you if you don’t like story where mc suddenly get lucky and become really strong fast.
and then I think it's the right thing about it that we can get the money out of nowhere and the game is the only way to make out the difference and I woke
I would like for the author to update on on the book right away please. I like the combination of different books and just concentrating on thr ml lead.
Okay, let me just get this out first—when Mu Nanyin saw Shen Junlin in that blood-soaked cell, I lost it. Completely. I had to put the book down and stare at the ceiling for a full five minutes. The way she looked at him, those heavy eyelids barely opening, and then the memories flooding back—it was devastating. She thought he was dead. She thought she had destroyed his life. And here he is, literally breaking down, tears falling into her blood, whispering "I'm sorry, I came too late" like it was HIS fault. Not hers. NEVER hers apparently, because she's the one who ruined him in the first life. And then—the rebirth. She wakes up on her wedding night, dagger in hand, and her first instinct is to hug him. Not fight. Not scheme. Just throw herself into his arms and sob sorry over and over. I swear to god the man had every right to be suspicious. He's being choked by the woman who spent years trying to annul this marriage, and suddenly she's crying about making it up to him? Of course he thinks it's another trick. "To preserve your purity for Shen Sichen, you truly spare no effort." That line hit me like a truck. He remembered EVERYTHING. Every humiliation, every snake in his bed, every rumor she spread. And yet—in the first life, he never retaliated. He just… endured. Let her do whatever she wanted. The bite scene was wild though. Like, he literally bit her shoulder like a feral animal and she just took it? And then when she offered herself to him, not as punishment but as genuine surrender, his reaction was to walk away. Walk. Away. Because apparently even in a revenge-rebirth novel, the male lead has standards. I respect it, but also—bro, she's literally offering herself and you're leaving? What is wrong with you men. But the real emotional gut-punch for me was the ending of Chapter 1. Mu Nanyin watching him stab himself, hearing "wait for me on the road to the Yellow Springs"—and then BOOM, rebirth. She wakes up gasping, hand still on that dagger, and for one second I thought she was going to kill herself again. But no. She just… looked at him. Really looked at him. And smiled through her tears. That smile. I can't. She finally understands. She finally sees him. And Shen Junlin has no idea what just hit him.
The story is fun and instersting but the grammar is really bad and need an edit also the explaination about background story for each character is lacking and the flow of story feels rushed.
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Loved it
I say, don't give up on this novel because of the very, very bad grammar in the first chapters.Also, you might think that this is a version of Moonlight Sculptor, and that the MC is like Weed. It looks like, but it is not.Although the development of the history is fast and you can't get yourself to like some of the characters, but you might like it nonetheless.