FoodReviewSnake
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Wow it's a better story in our coming world...cheak anything more about the story I find nothing without a future situation moment as the author created it.
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Another original addition to qi.Sounds different from all the cultivation or op no fks given mc out thereThere seems to be some real plot going in the backgroundwhy would that successful guy want to kill himself ?whats that white demon ?The immortal doesnt know he is immortal ?oh and there is no cultivation or any kind of power systemand it seems the author is influenced by Japanese culture to have names like thosehopefully we will have updates soon
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Hi there,Here I'm back with my shameless review for my own work.This novel is my second creation, I would say.So it should be better that my previous one.As usual I will still be making a Sci-Fi vs Fantasy setting.Kingdom Building will be happening later on.I know that the prologue might be a bit info dump but it was needed later on.Of course, I will still try to improve more than ever before.
This is really a good novel I found. Please keep writing. I really love your story. I am really immersed with it and wish chapter releases are more frequent. But I will wait.
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The first thing that pops up when reading this book is the detailed way in which the author brings the novel to life and as someone who loves anything paranormal, It's refreshing to see such good quality. Amazing work author ??
Just one problem It's the bad English Sometimes he's taking in past tense,Sometimes future tense, or he just straight up combined all the tense in one single paragraph.Because of that it's hard and confusing to understand what he's trying to say.(at least for me)But other than that the story is pretty good.
Translation sucks.......character design sucks....... won't even understand anything......even mtl is better than this translation..........
it is published in royalroad and being continued there
