He had already settled on what to do for Mable, nothing, and told the two slaves what he felt about them. What was he to do about the remaining three?
"He is not allowed to enter The Pine courtyard for 3 years. Send him back.
"I guess that goes to show how much they take their oaths," Ulric hopped to another branch hidden from a view as a log had flung itself to where he was stationed.
Sakura made a move to say something, but Kakashi held up a hand to dissuade her.
The story starts out fairly interesting with a uniquely mature protagonist, finding his place in a new world and it's pretty interesting for a couple of chapters but after a certain event where the protagonist kills someone he shouldn't have and needs to go on the run, the story gradually becomes stale, the chapters become more long winded and I can't really get into anything because the story and characters seem to have become nearly completely aimless, I even skimmed like half of the chapters I've read and I never felt like I missed out a single thing. The protagonist has had completely no development since early on, and while the side characters do develop, they're very basic characters through and through, nothing special to see there. Everything always somehow just works out for the protagonist and there are plot holes as ridiculous as one chapter an arm of the protagonist get broken and the next it's like the author completely forgot...The worst thing about the translation is that htere are often pov changes that happen without any indication, we're literally talking about 1 paragraph being from mc's perspective and the next from another's, there's no transition at all most of the time. It's quite ridiculous.
The start of the story is great and I‘m looking forward to more updates from the author
I am up to ch 13 and I am loving it!!!!!!!!!How is this not more popular?????????It should be in the rankings!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Great work author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you have a wonderful novel, good job author
great great great great great great great
One of the best kingdom building novels, I've ever read in my life, one of the best features is no racism, Chinese concept (madness ?). This novel got me hooked since chapter 3 and I can rank it as one of the best kingdom building novels, aside overgeard, world online, The overgeard fanfic and few others. Try it and you'll love it ?. Wish the author continue to drop more chapter and make it free?( I like free good novel )
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Muito envolvente, e fica cada vez melhor. Realmente uma novel que te faz querer ler mais e mais. Ainda sim ficou melhor de pois do segundo arco