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I have read King's Avatar before so when I started reading your story, it really reminded me of that reading experience. It is really good. The story is perfectly written and seems to be in sync so far.Although it is a very early review, I must say that your story has high potential.Keep up the good work. :)
It seems that the author is dead from Corona. It could have been a 5 star review if he just posted a single chapter in the last 3 months. But, no chapters, no comments, no replies. No activity from author. I am sure he died.
Veraciously narrated, the story is wondrous. I have seen so many stories like this genre but this one provoked my curiosity. I am thinking why in every group there are two elites from like the ultimate and only one is normal. As if the game creator is trying to find out who is more intelligent. The elites? Or the normal ones? Keep it up, let us satisfy with your words! Cause we need more chapters!!
Really nice story but I think you should have an editor, not that the writing has any mistakes but some punctuation's can really help increase the reading experience. It's difficult reading without those.
Novel Summary (copied)Xia Fei took a bottle of Siwu Gene Optimization Solution with no trademark, no date, no description, and no place of origin.Our story starts here…- Description from qidianDetailsShort Titlet:tSGOSAlternate Titlet:t超级基因优化液Statust:tCompleted (1680 chapters)Authort:tNine Light Years Per SecondCountryt:tChinaTypet:tWeb NovelGenret:tAction, Adventure, Sci-fi
From just the beginning I can already tell that this is going to be a good novel to read and I wish it was a anime or movie but I will be reading about this and this is just the beginning of a new novel
