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“Your Majesty, the mission has been accomplished. All of the concubines and the other female members in the palace including the princesses and the empress have passed away.”No beautiful men harmed but All the smelly, stinky women, killed... Hmp! Those smelly women trying to take our men! hehehe! Kill kill kill kill them all!!Great web novel for harem haters and Yaoi genre lovers.
It's a "how to" guide on hosting meal parties. There are consecutive chapters wasted on meal prep description and consumption description. The story has potential but, you can skip a lot and not miss anything.
I'm still not yet half of the story while giving this comment. However, I can say that at frist it has a similar plot with the other novel that i read. The difference was, this novel litterally focus on the tasks and not on emotional side.The male lead often finds the female lead on every world but there is no cheesy scenes here. I'm wondering actually what hapoened to those male leads in those worlds being left behind. I feel ache for them but I can't do much about it either. When it comes to the plot, every world is very interesting. Though there is no much romance in it, just the flow of the story hooked my interest endlessly. I really can't put down my phone. This is highly recommended and I hope that others may find this webnovel very interesting also.
One of the worst novels. The ML is a pedophile. Eeewwww. This is not even considered worst novel. Its more of a trash. Some novels are very bad but this tops it all. The ML is nothing but an old cow wanting to eat a young grass and even has no qualms in hurting the only relative of the FL. He doesn’t have a manners nor humanity in him. As i said trash.
Pls. Update this book I really like it
Best novel I’ve read on NovelFull so far
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Review after chapter 217.
Overall the novel and it's progression is good. However, there are a few quirks.
Firstly, his background on earth is not defined or limited. For example, what year did he leave earth? How much knowledge does he really have about weapon making? Is he genius enough to create new futuristic technology without any assistance?
Next the gun strength seems a bit off. However, that can be fixed by explaining why each gun can kill specific ranks of beasts or humans. Additionally, the limits and reason for things can be defined a bit better. For example, why certain technology exists in a country, but the rest of technology is pretty archaic. Or why someone had a specific type of technology but people above him do not have similar advanced tech.
Most importantly, the story needs an editor. The English is good enough to get across the story, however, the errors definitely break immersion.
This story could jump to a 4.5 and top rated novel if the previous and future chapters are edited. Keep up the work!
The Arthur gets the genders mixed up sometimes and the Mc abilities are a little complicated bug other than that everything is great Please try
It's a very slow pace story. The characters and MC IQ is walnut-sized, letting people attack them leave easily. Also, the most annoying character Liao Bufan exposes all the information that is supposed to be secret and acts scared and stupid all the time. He lakes common sense making stupid people seem intelligent compared to him.
I love this novel. I hope will continue............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hello Daoists, I am Fateless, a cultivator who has chosen the path of writing through The Heavenly Sword Emperor.I am not an English realm cultivator, so my early chapters were a little worse, but my English writing skills have improved since the day I started writing. If you don't believe me, you can compare my latest chapters with my past chapters, and even then, If you believe, My skills didn't improve even after a month, you can quit my novel, and I won't complain a bit. But before quitting, please provide me your valuable comment on which areas I should improve. That's my only request.But I also should think about it from the readers' point of view, so I decided to edit my early chapters for readers' convenience, but it would take some time as I decided to post two chapters daily.So for some time, you have to bear my ignorant mistakes. As far as I know, it won't be difficult for you as so many of you read novels on M.......L Sites(I can't say the name here).So I hope you would support me, Fateless.
