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It's an interesting story as far as I went, but I can't continue reading it, the grammar and syntax are killing me. It takes all the joy away from me and ruins the immersion in it. It's like I can understand the story while at the same time can't and it ticks me off.If author gets a proof reader or improves later on, I will come back, probably..
the system really portraits the MC's zero intelligence on his stat window, and school life... IDK why people still like school life stories, ima add this to the read when desperate pile
I LOVE THIS BOOK AND ITS AMAZING!!! U DID U STOP WRITING?? PLEASE COME BACK AND START WRITING AGAIN!! I REALLY WANT THE BOOK TO KEEP GOING!!!
This isn't xianxia nor it is a western take of xianxia. This is more Avatar The Legend of Korra if people know what that means. It is still readable and enjoyable, but the story really has zero dignity and is full of western garbage.
Coming into this I thought it would be a MVS clone but surprisingly that wasn't the case. Sure there will be some moments where you can see that the novel was heavily inspired by JKS's works but, it's pretty different in its own right. The beginning is pretty much the same but around a couple of chapters in, the story starts to become it's own. Kye meets a pretty cool cast of characters most of which aren't similar at all to MVS's be it their personalities or the way they interact with one another. The events that have taken place and the way Kye develops also differ from MVS. The story is still in it's infancy stage but I can see that it has potential, it's up to the author to utilize it and turn it into something great.
very good book now for 140 characters hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhgggggggghhggggggggyyyygygyyyyyyyyy
the most awesome book I ever read. thank you so much.
I'm just here to give a review, though I can't say much about your work as not much happened yet, though I'll say it's interesting to read and you're doing good being a firstimer :>
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Right now this book is one of my favs and I gotta say it is AWESOME. While the start was a bit slow it was well paced and very informative. It also was a good start for the world building and character design. The idea of interuniversal death games is pretty good and there is no need for the mc to go from battlefield to battfield. Plus the mc is an ass so it also has comedy along with action. I would recommend this book since I think this will be a book that will cover all kinds of things from cultivation to sports or to even horse racing so this would be a new experience for us veterans since there aren’t many books of this kind and some color newbies. Anyways THANKS AUTHOR THIS BOOK IS F*CKING AWESOME PLEASE DONT DROP THE QUALITY AND INCREASE THE QUANTITY. ;)
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