I do not seek to offend or insult anyone, it is my point of view.
The novel has an interesting concept and premise.
As for the rest:
The mc feels stupid and meaningless, he trusts and falls in love EXTREMELY fast (in a matter of 1 paragraph or 1 chapter- I meet) just like the MC's girls, the romance is close to 0.
There is no clear world development.
The power system is totally unbalanced and with many inconsistencies and no senses.
The mc's plot armor is at unnatural levels, equaling or even surpassing goku from DBZ or issei from DxD.
In summary:
A novel that could have had great potential, wasted by a lousy development.
Everything about this story is good even excellent imo besides two things:
Grammar mistakes, like misusing he/she/her/his/prince/princes/princes/princesses/should/could/would.
Pacing is slow at certain parts of the story but in general it's fine.
Besides that the plot, the character design, the characters' interactions, the drama and the ability to make the reader emotional towards the MC are top-notch.
This novel has amazing potential, a hidden gem only if you can ignore those two cons I urge you to read the story otherwise you are going to be frustrated.
To the author please fix those mistakes because this story is a gem but unfortunately, most readers won't bear with the grammar mistakes and will drop the novel before realizing the plot is extremely good. Good luck and I hope you the best!
It looks like Stargate I UP VOTE !!!!
I miss you Stargate Universe, i hope a fan while help make a sequel... Sad we miss the 3rd saison, but perhaps they are all dead and this is the end.
Hope you don’t drop there isn’t any good basketball novels coming out lately I read all the good ones already
100% best book i've ever read, author tries their best when they write it and it's very cute, keep up the good work author, you'll get recognition for your work if you persist.
Its a well written story, not only grammatically, but the author also think about which stuff suits the best for the story.
I think that this story is worth to read. Thumbs up.
Man really love the story, but just dnt make it in to another harem that goes of main topic. . .......
best thing Is synopsis do not match content inside
i am at chapter 62 and mc Is using gold coins And not points And Hes ONLY one with system rest Are just poor people trying to suvive.
in content It says catastrophe started over 100 year And then there Are some 40 years people that remember times before ..
Its some how luckluster but not terrible
Superpowers and suspense, oh boy. I am liking this already. I've got to see what happens to Luis. This is a great book. I recommend reading it.
Read what was free for a reference point. Author needs to go back and edit his earlier chapters. I don’t know how you can forget your own characters names. Wish that their was more world building going on even if it’s not know to the MC as the reader it helps with knowing if the story will be to their liking. MC at times seems to have different personalities and switches thought processes. Didn’t really fight a whole lot in the first phase even with all those warning so I was a little disappointed. Was hoping for an attack on the settlement to see the defenses in action. The whole shelter as a skill is kinda unique, wish the story fleshed out a bit more in the free chapters but good luck to the author and hope the update stability doesn’t drop
Good story marred with many of the same problems that all regressor-vmmorpg stories have:1) Equipment is never changed - until way too late, if you want to press your advantages you will of course make sure that you are wearing the best equipment, feeding the growing weapon with as many weapons as possible to increase your stats, etc.2) Not learning skills - I understand that you have the Versatile class and have to manage many skills, this does not prevent you from learning all of the passive skills instead of leaving the skill points sitting there, once again you are in a race against time.3) Trying to act "low key" - This is the stupidest thing ever, you want power? Being a lone strong person doesn't help, he needs allies, fame and fortune. Let people know how important it is to be by your side.4) Money - He said he would help his parents, and yet, nothing so far (or maybe I missed it)And my last point, work on the grammar and sentence construction, sometimes it feels awkward.
It's a little ridiculous how Leo's stats are off the charts, but in 7, it kinda makes sense. It takes a while for the actual story to get good but the fights are pretty dope. Dialogue needs a bit of work tho