Not with the ending it doesn't. The ending alone makes me move this absolutely amazing story to the trash pile because of what the author did.
Man... That's legit JoJo reference
Racism trash
pei ge....quite irritating...Foolish..
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This is my first book and there might be mistakes (which I try my best for it to not appear). The story might start off slow, but I wanted to take into account the actions of everyone(or every entity/organization) around him (protagonist). One chapter took me a lot of rewrites to get it logical. I also didn't want to info dump as that's just going to make you forget a lot of things.
This is a hidden gem especially if you like darker novels, the mc is somewhat op but he still runs into problems a lot. I like how the author handled him existing for so long by making him just box everything away. His morals are non existent after spending so long in torturous pain but I would like there to be moments where he questions what he’ s, maybe if he commits mass murder for little to no reason.
My suggestion for the author to increase readers is to change the synopsis, its really long and to be honest I only read through like half or less, it doesn’t tell you what the story is about at all. If you wish to keep the poems In it I would suggest putting them beneath a reagular synopsis, when I first saw this novel I was going to not read it because of the synopsis but I’m I gave it a chance.
At first I quite liked it, but as other's have mentioned he's the oblivious or slow (to a crawl)-type MC typical of japanese writing, which in and of itself isn't inexcusable, but around chapter 60 I couldn't take it anymore.
He starts creating underlings with his multiple minds, creates a part of 1 dude and 3 women (different bodies but all a copy of his own brain in them), and they immediately, for no reason, start having intimate group sessions while the main body has a wife (and a sister) he refuses to touch. 60 chapters of waiting for him to man up and do something on anyone, even his fiance, and within 2 paragraphs of making copies of himself they are having three ways.
Honestly, I'm only writing a review to find out if the author is going to continue it, I never felt that a novel in Webnovel was worth paying for until this one, I like kingdom building and this one does it very well, things are well studied.I like that it is not a reincarnation or a normal transmigration, the mc receives memories through dreams, but he feels Roman, for those who complain that he is stupid, that is honestly the reason why I gave him a 5 star in construction character, normally in Webnovel they are usually made into perfect gentlemen from the beginning, but they are just characters, they don't feel human.It's a shame that he ended up in the fight for Persia.
Okay I liked this book a lot but now it's really really expensive to read. 2 passes for every chapter? I liked this book so i started reading it and now it's so expensive I would rather not read it. I have to wait 2 days to read one chapter. Come on man.
A chunky and overall bad read so I’m out
I like it bcuz it football and I hate it when it's about assist. even irl no one care about assist, no matter how beautiful your assist is, you still forgotten by the scorer. what a waste of good novel
Dark of night and waxing mooncome to us a single poolhear us sing our witches' songand send us moonlight clear and strongEarth and water, wind and fireone and all you must conspireto banish bad for goodness sakecos I need moonshine for my cakeWeary travelers long agoshared their bread and made a vowthat they will be forever friendsand so shall be until time ends