Hi guys just want you to know that Im doing this for fun and in no way am i good in writing so sorry if there is spelling or grammar mistake. I trying my best with this fan-fic so hope you enjoy
This author could have invested half an hour of his time with any form of make believe study (like google search for example) to learn a little about what he wanted to write about. At least, and even if you are completely BSing us, you could try to justify a little what you are saying and please you also could try to assume that the readers have at least a little of intelligence or knowledge.Sorry but i don't have time to read more than a few words. I have a much more satisfactory thing to do: to take a dump.
A few bits of information if you even want to proceed with reading this novel :(-) MC is slow to adapt and he is a “wimp”, meaning if you came here for an actual villain this isn’t the novel you want or if you came here for an intelligent and calculating MC also do not read this book(+) The premise of the story is interesting where you get this fantasy world with Gods, Adventurers (Players), Classic ranking systems like Silver, Gold, Platinum(*) The characters are decent, the novel is set in first person and thus heavily relies on dialogue and interactions for you to know more about them which unfortunately means World Background takes a few points off despite an interesting setting due to the fact that it is strictly first person with lack of early-novel exploration events(*) Writing quality is decent for a webnovel nothing much to say though the main issues are typos which isn’t that bad====••===••===••===••===••===••====Writing Quality : 3.5/5 nothing crazy but not horribleUpdating Stability : 5/5 its still updating with a good amount of chapters to read[Slow-Paced] Story Development : 3/5 its ok, the MC does get around to doing things but its nothing much and at the moment hes still within the starter area Character Design : 3/5 not a personal fan of the MC but it does make for more “danger” when it comes to him going outWorld Background : 4/5 unexplored for the most part but has a lot of potential ================================Tips for the author :- It helps to switch between the MC and the people he has interacted with in order to develop characters and the world more easily and it also lets us take a break from prolonged firstperson view which can be exhausting and boring to read- Fix typos- Lots of world potential and character potential so capitalize on it
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In the last few weeks the quality of the translation has become worse and worse. This translation is again an example that it is simply a MTL and not one has taken the trouble to check the chapters before it was uploaded.The Story itself looks fine but I only read the first two chapters and then stopped because of the quality of the translation.
Very interesting plot and worldview. The author knows how to introduce good characters. If you love fantasy books, this book is perfect for you
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The story has been good so far. The world building is great! I love how Javer character has a different kind of speaking (?) because he was from different region! it's a nice touch!
THIS BOOK IS AMAZING!! KEEP GOING WITH IT!!
The writing is fine as well as the updates, but the world background is a complete ripoff of previously existing translated novels on this website, for example, the old man buying food for his pet, both were fire type which he could've at least changed the element but no he didn't. Another point, is the angel he met, the only difference is that its an angel instead of a protass/god, otherwise its exactly the same other than the fact that he made it earlier on in the story. Feel free to delete this author, but i can keep writing a new review.
I would feel sorry for Wuxia for copyrights and blah blah wah wah, but they release one chapter each WEEK while Webnovel releases TWO each DAY. Cant call it stealing if they translate chapters that Wuxia hasnt even released yet.
It's generic trash, don't get why people defend it, i see a couple of bots in the reviews as well, pls don't translate any more of this type except if it is actually good