Author here:Sorry for any grammar mistake or spelling mistake that I missed . I have always wanted to write an original Gamer story and this is my first attempt at it..It's a good VR game novel with a Female MC. I have tried to make the world building real and logical Thank you for reading the story.
The novel was readable until the "ranking competition" but after that the plot just had so many inconsistencies and repetitions which made it unreadable. It was a waste of my time, don't let it waste yours.
This copy paste novel got chosen over War Truck In Apocalypse and other good novels what a pity! So sad I really wanted to read something good.
Okay, my review could be called unfair as I only read 4 chapters.But it just doesn't make sense.He picks a sword and jump to the skeletons in his first time in a VRG, he also explains he wasn't afraid of them because he has Battle Mode, like if his real life also had skills and fight in the streets to learn his skills(nothing of that was explained, nor how the Battle mode). Also, the no fear made no sense.Then in the same 1.- day and just after like 2 hours he already has perfect swordmanship(he is the successor of the style) to do perfect moves, fight a captain skeleton and do 999,999 dmg in one atk.I just don't get it, nor the life and past of our MC or the fact that he do like 2 months of game play in a normal rpg in less than 3 hours and learning to use a sword perfectly without any experience.I really have no idea how people give perfect scores and reviews here where perfection doesn't even exist.
--Book Info--Chinese Name: 龙血武帝Total Chapters: 5390Date Created: 2014~2014Total Collections: 20,000--Author Info--Author Level: Great God (???)Works: 2--Disclaimer--Please take these stats with a grain of salt, as I am using Google Translate and there's also just a possibility that Qidian did something to the page or whatever.
Worth a read. The characters are well written and the story seems to be progressing in a good direction. It is in early to comment too much but the story seems promising and as the title suggests there is a universe to explore so will be reading it and will comment further down the line again.…Now webnovel won’t let me comment it cause 140 words. So I’m typing some random s**t here so no need to worry.Guy 1- Why aren’t koalas actual bears?Guy 2- Cause they don’t meet the koalafication.…Guy 1-you’re American when you go into the bathroom and out of the bathroom but what are you when you’re IN the bathroom?Guy 2- what?Guy1- Europeein.…It takes guts to be an organ donor. (read again I know you didn’t get it).…If math is mathematical and quizzes are quizzical then what are tests?
THIS BOOK WAS AMAZING. I ENJOYED EVERY CHAPTER AND WAS LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT ONE. I THINK THERE SHOULD BE A SECOND BOOK. IT HAD A LOT OF ACTION, LOVE, FEELINGS IN IT. ALL OF THE CHARACTERS HAD THE OWN INDIVIDUAL POWER, WHICH I THOUGHT WAS A GOOD IDEAL THEY WORKED TOGETHER AS A GROUP, YET INDIVIDUALLY.
It is like a game choice ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Is this a Translation?!?! cause I think it's not. It would be better to just give us the raw title and let us read in mtl.????.....
Basically,'History's Number One Founder' theme???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I hate this story. Ahem. So basically, the MC decides to start refining pills, so he rents a room to do so. And somehow, the gang of antagonists are inside the room, mocking him constantly. Like, HOW? WHY? Can't the MC kick them out or something? I thought he rented a room, not a theatre. Don't the antagonists have better things to do? There's an assessment coming up soon, shouldn't they be cultivating? Faceslapping is manageable but this story, the author just pours it on the plot with no regard to logic, while the MC just sits there and lets it happen... is unbearable.
Y'all want my honest review? For me this is trash! Cultivation are mixed up. I can't comprehend ¾ of the term since its not in English. It feels rushed and cliché but hey, that's just me