Desperate author here ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ.Please make an honest review. I'm gonna try and make my updating frequent from now on.Gambare Gambare (◠‿◕)
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goooodddddd.. overall nice..................
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Do yourself a favour and read this gem. I promise you this. Mark my words, if you don't read it now, you will regret it in the future!
it's good story, writing got better every update and stable chapter every week, appreciate bro
Another good novel from the author with a great premise not original but at least well done with a consistent updates schedule but at the end of the day nothing is perfect.So for the flaws that I found in this novel :-well first there’s a lot of repetition like in his other novels idk if it is intentional to reach words counts or is it bcz of some app that he use to correct the grammar and spelling mistakes, don’t get me wrong there’s not that many mistakes If there’s any tbh I don’t remember if there is, so using those app maybe the reason in every it say the same thing over and over again just with different world -second like his other novels the MC start already with all the knowledge about magics and runes but we don’t know how did he get that knowledge or why did he even having, like in abyss lord we learn that the mc basically was the pioneer of rune mastery, in this novel instead we learn that he was from the same original universe zatiel came from the AI chip and all and reincarnated in the same universe too in the race that he created but zatiel never knew about it or mentioned it in that novel, okay I get the author just like the concept of the statut panel to easily explain his power progression, but for me taking the part of learning and discovering runes again is kinda dissapointing and how does those runes even works in this universe bcz u said the laws of physics don’t work anymore and work with different laws and rules so I just don’t understand how they work and all that knowledge just becomes deus machina to come in clutch when they’re in a pitch-third the timespan/timeline of the story isn’t quit clear maybe it’s just me -the MC is kinda too much heroic like he doesn’t have what to be a king I guess that’s what happen when u are depravita of wrath it’s kinda isn’t the ideal race to rule a kingdom, I hope in the future he will fuse it with its counterpart one that doesn’t rely on emotional power like zatiel did by combining the abyssal with the angelic Well this is my review I recommend reading this novel and the author other novels Ps: author I hope u wouldn’t succumb to temptation like u did last time and go the harem route just keep it one single female lead
Quite a good book with an interesting Mc, Fml, and other characters. The writing quality while not perfect is better than the majority on this sight, but perhaps this is just my opinion.Story development definitely not fast but interesting as I can see a great picture growing in the background.Stability should be more than now, but we can only hope the author will increase updates.All in all, I recommend everyone to at least try it as I don't feel it is a waste of time at all.
This book has a lot of potential but I feel like it’s being missed due to certain issues. 1) The characters and that includes the main characters seem to have no emotional connections.I have mentioned before how this novel especially in relation to the main characters connection reminds me of Rise of the Three Gods but the difference I’ve seen is that the characters have no real emotional connection to each other. Whether one is happy or sad or any other emotion the characters don’t concern themselves with this the only thing they seem to care about is ensuring that one doesn’t die besides that nothing. I believe from what I’ve read if Fang Lin and Fang Yu were able to develop and grow without each other or the connection they absolutely would not care for the others wellbeing. Wang Hao if he didn’t need them to get stronger wouldn’t care about them either. No emotional connections have been developed leading stagnation or lack of development in the characters. 2) Wang Hao is in comparison to all the other divine and godly divine bloodlines way overpowered even under sealed conditions and this overwhelming strength is one of the reasons where he is unable to truly connect with Fang Lin ,he is never in a condition of vulnerability to help foster emotion connections. Even with only a few seals released he needs almost no one to truthfully help him.3) The speed of their development I’m not saying power them up super fast but I’m assuming that the person who sealed Wang Hao is simply getting stronger and Wang Hao who already seems insanely overpowered is supposedly weaker that the person to sealed him with he fact that we don’t actually know how long he’s been sealed in the coffin and how long it’s talking them to reach higher realms it seems like by the time they are powered up and Wang Hao is fully unsealed their opponent will only be more powerful besides Wang Hao is not gaining more strength as he’s unsealed he’s just returning to his initial strength so that makes it seem like getting revenge is impossible.4) As readers we like to see the main character that was seen as trash improve in status and genuine happiness as he goes further in his path but in many ways Fang Lin is more pitiful than when we actually met him. That with the completely opposite treatment of Fang Yu doesn’t make me in see her in a good light at all providing to much to light to one character just makes the readers focus more on the neglected character and could actually turn readers against Fang Yu in the long run. I mean if you have a family member and you have a good relationship with them you would tend to help them even if it’s only small things but Fang Yu from the moment she was picked up by Xiao Ya has basically gone on her own the interaction between her and Fang Lin has been solely based on cultivation needs. In treatment of main characters in stories with multiple main characters it’s important to try and keep the treatment of each balanced or at least not so skewered to one side. I think that’s another area when Rise of the three Gods beats you in. 5) Reading the novel there are instances where your treatment of one character is truthfully brutal almost to the point of being cruel and this does keep readers interested as we want to see that characters situations actually improve but if you keep using that as the thing to keep people reading and waiting for that can backfire as it’s basically you creating an itch for the readers that is never actually being scratched which if anyone knows anything about that feeling eventually leads to just intense rage at the book at the author at the entire story. There are lots of elements of the story that people enjoy using that to keep people reading may lead to people actually disliking the book rather that actually enjoying. Lots of us read light novels like this because we like seeing characters achieve their dreams, improve their status and life but in ways you’ve done the exact opposite well it’s definitely original but a novel can be original without taking out the things people genuinely loved about other novels.Well I wrote this cause the author asked me to. Maybe not what she meant when she asked but I did it and spoke honestly about what I saw as a reader. Hope you’ll take sum of my suggestions to mind or at least work on some of these areas. This is my first ever review and probably way to long so sorry for that
So I have finished reading the first volume which ended around chapter 68/69. If I should rate the volume it would 6.5/10 or 7/10. As the author mentioned in some chapters he is doing it for the experience but does have simple yet effective writing style and rarely any grammar issues so all is well in department. The world is relatively unexplored and would most likely take the trope of small jobs to big jobs like normal isekai with hidden monster or secret villain. The plot is predicatable if you have read novels since it's used often plus anime. I would love mystery to the would building.The characters fit their stereotypes except for the main character. From the description everything matches with their personality so nothing is out of place. Some of the instances meant for character growth comes quite cringe or irritating. Some jokes and some don't. The Druid is quite irrigating nothing she says is out of character (for the most part). But what she says and acts is so frustrating that...and it's expected that some characters don't have good chemistry for groups but I respect the patience of the MC at times because damn they can be irritating. The characters work I would sayFinal thoughts, it's above average I would say but some the characters may turn you off but as the author said he is doing this for fun
I am a fujoshi and i actually skipped to the *** scene (im so dirty minded)hgegycyot7tia77rw47wts8ts75w4syidt7s7rd7tdt7gsut5ww7wu4sgsruwr7aedyid5w4euofits46s47dfxgodtisr8sy0g6p
Getting a Harry Potter vibe from this excellent piece of work. Very descriptive and brilliant use of words. Loved how the story starts to build up leaving mysteries in every corner. Well done, author!