i am very disappointed i thought its was a check point system not a check-in system..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Too many repeats, had tp go back several times, annoying. Brother sister friends are out of loopy road, they are there but how do they look like and what are their character like. And isnt the sister way too exyreme and foolish. Dont make sense most of the time, Not enough detailing and presentation. U made the wine but can't there some word play there
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It was honestly 5 stars for me until a teammate gets kidnapped and raped. This story was written as a wish fullfilment thing Nd i got to say...I would have died fighting for my people rather than watch this garbage happen in front of me. This is sick and a left turn out of no where for me in an other wise great novel. Too bad. Gotta drop it now.
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It started out as a pleasant read but then turned into chinese propaganda feces. I wasted my time reading stroke-chinamen-ego-by-reading-their-garbage-propaganda-disguised-as-a-novel.
A great novel,starting is goodThe grammar is also good. it draws you In from the beginning.The world building, and settting is also goodCan’t wait for more chapters
I really like this novel as I have read up till chapter 931 to this point, but there are few key point with the story that irks me to no end. One such thing is how the author focuses almost too much on side characters in certain parts or drags out parts of the story without the MC imo. Like the Pandelympics were like 100 chaoters long with little to no content from MC when everything could’ve just been paraphrased and everyone would’ve still enjoyed it, as it was not that interesting for me. Another thing is how author at the start really focused on the summons and the MC progressing, but now it just seems like he’s except for some random bs way to give him new abilities. The third thing that annoys to me is how there is a sorry excuse for information in the novel, like the readers will have no idea about 90% of what the characters are taling about but somehow Adrian just knows everything because the author just focuses on these long drawn out quests for 10s of chapters and no true exploration or level grinding or interactions. Thats it for my rant and I still like the story just author could’ve antop tier novel but because of things listed above it doesn’t ge as much recognition and it stays as a mid tier novel for me and probably many others
Okay hear me out but Agent Wave is hot! He's so my type *Squeal**** If only I could be Hira Callan I would **sings that should be me by Justine bieber**
when is the next update? loving the story thus far!!!
First of all, I love the name Aiden! And then the mafia story is just this thing!! Keep it up author!
GREAT BOOK