I FOUND A TREASURE ???I got hook as early as 1st chapter!!! (Really!)Eloquently written, vivid and engaging yet not dragging descriptions for so long that eats up entire chapter (which is usually irksome) Not the usual cliche storyline that we always find here in webnovel. Character build up is solid. The originality is refreshing amongst the saturated volume of novels. I cried and laugh with the chapters like I'm part of the journey. This quality of writing is rare find. ?And for the author to be able to do this passion of writing amidst day job and reality is inspiring!I won't be surprised if this novel will shoot up to top rankings! Congratulations in advance! I finally found another beautiful novel after a long time. ? Thank you!
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
Hey everyone, I'm the author of Shadow Bug and I want to use the opportunity to thank everyone who read my work while it was serializing. It's going on Hiatus for no so I can work out the rest of the story.once again, thank you so much and I hope you'll still be here when Shadow Bug returns ??
Just wanted to put this here as a disclaimer, that I'm writing this mainly for fun, but I still want to learn to be a better writer so feedback is appreciated!
Wow, I'm loving it so far, I'm not usually into these kind of novels but this one really got me hooked, added to library will definitely be binge reading tonight ?
A fun novel to waste time. The author's style is constantly improving. Perhaps my only problem is that there is some filler in the middle chapters, but the author may have realized his mistake and become better than it was.
Enjoy the read! I liked the character development, keep it up!!
I absolutely love this book! The author's writing is vivid and engaging, perfectly capturing the angst, humor, and vulnerability of adolescence.What struck me most about this book is its ability to balance lighthearted moments with deeper themes, creating a narrative that feels both entertaining and impactful. Chester's character is expertly crafted, making him a protagonist that readers of all ages can root for.
the author is clever enough to write the prologue of the book in an intriguing manner, animals transforming into monsters and the earth being under attack, this book got me hooked from the start and i can't wait to read more, if youre looking for a combo of thriller, fantasy and action then this book is definitely for you!
Enjoyable so far. Has a lot of potential
MOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!
The pros:The story is a very pleasant easy read with good writing style. I kept on reading chapters after chapters.The main character is an endearing somewhat impulsive but well intentioned girl. She doesn't act like an all knowing MC, nor does act stupid, it's just right!Also, there are lots of mysteries. Lots of foreshadowing as well that gives the reader a good chance to make a few guess many chapter in advance, some of them will be right! :) Each chapter is very long (like 3 or 4 "standard royal road" chapter, with many different scenes in it), and much action is happening, doesn't feel drawn out, unlike many other stories here on RR and despite chapter size.The cons:There lots of flashback and scene transition that are abrupt and somewhat confusing.Suspension of disbelief. This story will stretch it quite a lot!For example, the story has many unbelievable plot holes, I am not talking about super power and the like, the premise of such story. Instead, for instance, in Oleander - the main city in that story - there are like about 10 to 20 heroes and villains alike and they have been on status quo for quite a while. Neither winning or losing members, despite some super being extremely more powerful than others. The first 3 super fight Hope is in, one side is clearly the winner, but an unexpected lucky twist let the loser escape. Like every single fight. While it might be a staple of superhero stories to have the same actors in many episodes in a row, this is quite hard to believe here.Another example. Heroes do not kill. The story feels strongly about that. Meanwhile the villains are killing like hundreds of civilians per minutes. But that's fine, we can't fault nor terminate them for that hey?