need improvement on writing to avoid double wordings, but still enjoyable to read
Really good stuff here. Already anticipating what you'll throw at us next. Keep it up !!
Seems very promising to be honest, I hope it gets updated more frequently because i want to read more of this. Writing style is nice and relatable. Definitely good.
This is epic. This is one of the most interesting female lead stories I've read! I'm totally caught up in it. I recommend it, highly recommend!?❤️??
Fantastic work the Author . The world building is great and characters has consistent I genuinely enjoy the story .Keep up the good work.
Though i am more of eastern fantasy.tge book is definitely a worth read. Reading it makes me wanna possess that system that can basically improve everything.All in all, kudos to the author for this master piece.
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"Oh Lilith, what's wrong?" Light asked, who just woke up from the bed.
There were a different number of tabs on the interface, but the one that caught his attention first was labeled 'READ ME.' Following what he did first to open up the interface the first time, he concentrated on the tab and as he expected it opened up.
I may not seem very big but don't be fooled I am very sturdy, very very unnaturally sturdy. No wild rodent teeth will be able to able to bite me now!
"What exactly is going on?" Matthew asked.
No, I’m just in the process of selling my house and moving so have no internet except my phone at the moment, difficult to write decently on it. But I am working on next chapter. Have had to rewrite it a few times as I didn’t like it as it was.