A unique and good novel. Good plot twist...weak to Strong Mc...chapters are detailed and no Grammatical mistakes...Detailed background...stable chapter update...overall a very good novel to read
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I tried really hard to like this story.
My biggest problem with the story is that it feels like its going nowhere.
I feel like MC has no goal like noting to go for there also seems to be no enemy. So we just wave along with whatever is going on.
I read like 270 chapters in 2 days and i can sum up what happens in a few lines.
I feel like there is no substance in this story. MC just does stuff that's about it.
We barley see MC fight we have noting to root for i think there are like 15 fighting chapters maybe less where MC is fighting.
And when a fight happens MC is NEVER there.
He is always comprehending some ****ty law or cultivation or whatever.
So we get like 6-7 chapters of forgotten characters that fight and get like 1-2 where MC does something.
MC also vanishes from the story for like 5+ chapters and we are like why do we need this info again?
There are also some really stupid stuff going on like:
- MC fell 5 minute's straight and had no injury what so ever (he was like just starting to cultivate to)
Then he uses all his qi to fly up and he could not go more then 50m and fell down again.
But 2 days later he can fly all the way up (like 300km)
I think he was 8 grade mortal to like 5 grade second thingy
So you are telling me he has 600 times more Qi now then he had b4?
(also does not take him long to get to the top)
-MC is flying up a mountain 15000feed (less then 5km) but it takes him 5h so you are saying me he is flying 5x slower then the average human walks?
Then the next time he is flying super fast again its all over the place.
He could fly 300km up a pit but he can't fly for a few km again next time cuz his Qi was out when he has allot more Qi now.
-And don't get me started on the trails / dreams / ... we get like chapters upon chapters of random filler character fighting we never see again.
-And After his first trail they said he will need to do another one at 20% of his bloodline yet now it looks like he will need to do it at 5% for no reason whatsoever.
-... ...
Then lets talk about MC.
- He is fairly stupid makes retarded mistakes (obv stuff)
- Should act evil when he acts more normal barley kills anyone
- Cultivates like a hard demon cultivation thingy when all it accomplishes is to restrict mc do do certain stuff.
-Also i was hoping for there to be some romance but MC is a blockhead
Also don't get me started on MC secrecy. Hides his cultivation from his family for 270 chapters when all they do is worrie for him. Like they are not bad people like you might think they will backstab him or whatever.
Even if its only to his grandpa & mother but NOOO he can't tell them shit . They took care of him when he was a retard for 6 years then again when he was training (aka not moving) for another 3/4 years.
Yet he can't tell them he is strong and moving all over the place they still think he is a weak shit.
We also know noting abut the world.
Like all i can say you is eummm i think there are more continents.
oo Yea and the last one, there is so much
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This is one of Er Gen's masterpieces. I invested a lot of time in reading this novel. Up to chapter 917 everything was just fine but then translation quality just went downhill. What a giant letdown. Absolute disgrace (and webnovel expects you to pay for mtl quality translation). I say no thank you. Who ever let this monstrosity of a translation happen should get fired. This ruined the whole novel for me and there is no way I am forcing myself to read mtl even if its Er Gen's work.
An editor who selected a novel with a rating of 3.3, which is hated by pretty much everyone other than bots instead of the many other good novels available should probably resign out of shame. Shame on qidian for taking away the opportunity of good writers just to promote their agenda.
A very good and interesting book full of wonders and suprise.
Dangers and adventure also makes it hard to resist reading.
Great book one of a kind can't wait to continue.
I'm ashamed to say I completed it. Horrible novel is not enough to describe this.
The Author won't make up his dam mind.. It's better if this novel doesn't see the light and day for us English speakers[img=fp]
Trust me, for the dear life don't read this. I'm traumatized in a way. If you want spoilers I'll tell you.
First 500 chapters. He's against Guilds and increases his Bandits.
After 500 chapters he fights againsts U.S and other countries because they want to destroy China. Hard core racism.
After a few hundred chapters - It turns to Ben 10 now. Literally. He fights against Alien players and the galaxy. None of this was foreshadowed or hinted. Everything f*cking forced.
The Author clearly gives no f*cks about his story. All characters you know disappear and hardly even had a scene in the entire series!
Nothing makes sense and I'm brain dead [img=faceslap]
At least its not your typical young master looked down on, struggles to prove himself blah blah.
1000 years ago MC was super OP, family clan is declining and using his body, anyway, wakes up but cant do anything directly only indirectly influencing people and their abilities from his coffin as he regains strength and uses a system which works off respect points.
Not much cliche stuff, its all told from an interesting perspective, and people aren't making facepalm decisions.
Basically just a fun read, you probably havnt read anythanything too similar to those who been on qidian a while.
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Messy universe ! Horrible writing ! The main character doesn't even have a name ?! What kind of retard wrote this trash ! -_-
*Turns Around * Oh wait that'd be me ! 0_0
Does anyone know its chinese name? Or a site where you can read it mtl? I can’t find it so I would really appreciate it if you could help Thanks
Best story so far Mr author.Am in dire need of a new chapter soon plzzzzz.I love the everything here.Its just Perfecto I can say.Keep on with the same morale.Love your novel soooo muchhh
The plot is everything and its grabs you to travel with it to a roller coaster of a ride.. i enjoyed the story a lot... keep up the good work!! The characters very are intriguing