Sithaari
It's a good novel. I don't currently have the energy to write a proper review so I will just say my thoughts.
Writing quality: I'm not a native English speaker so I can't give a 100% accurate review but I think it's good.
Story development: It's still very early in the story so there isn't much to say but it's currently pretty good.
Character design: The Mc with how he views everything is very irritating in the beginning. I know that he only views it as a game but his lack of interest in the "lore" and complaining about how realistic the game is. It's just very irritating to read. The other characters are good but they lack enough chapters to get fully developed. Still, they are all mostly enjoyable.
Updating stability: It's currently good.
World background: The world-building is good but the system appears to little. He doesn't have any status screen. While he can get missions there isn't any specific way how. There also barely exists a way for the Mc to consistently grow stronger.
Another small problem that will be solved in the future is the game itself. From my understanding, it's a real world and multiple copies of the game were sold so shouldn't he find other players? That is of course unless his exclusive copy was the only one that let someone enter the real world. Still too little is explained about the game itself and those that sold it. Not that it's a real problem since it will be explained in the future.
This is a great novel to try when your looking for any kind of werewolf novel that doesn’t just turn into a cliché love story; the writing quality is also very good and the story has a good progression. As for the characters I think they are well written and I’m glad this doesn’t turn into a novel where all the prominent characters go through a complete personality change to suit the author’s or readers need for the book. 7/26/22 Ch.28
From what I read of this novel thus far I'm hooked. I'm glad to see it make an appearance on webnovel.
I hope it'll get published soon and we can all enjoy it.
Good novel bro........................................................................................................................................................................
This review is at 353 chapters so I'm fairly confident that I have a thorough understanding of what to expect from this story, the author, and the translator. First and foremost, this is an absolutely excellent story. I personally think that it is even better than the Harry Potter book series. I'd even go as far as to say that I like RTW most out of the 17 books I am currently reading and in all honesty it is one of the best stories I have ever read, and I'm fairly certain that the number of books I have read have most definitely exceeded the 100 books mark. The pacing of the story is excellent, the power progression is logical and unique, the main character is not the "dude" type and is actually an intellectual, no one in the book cares about illogical or stupid things like face, and overall the world just feels extremely real. There are almost no grammatical mistakes whatsoever and overall the chapters have been releasing at a steady and fast pace. Overall there is simply no way for me to give this story anything but a 5 star on all categories! Great job to the author and the translators!! :)
This is by far One of the best if not the best Harry Potter fan fiction I've read, all I ask of you is to not drop it... But if you do have a solid reason to do so I won't/can't blame you... Pls keep this personality of his it is very different in all the others that I have read and the one where Harry is in Slytherin is fairly rare so I give my support to you!!! (even though it may not mean much)
Hey everyone! This is my first web serialisation. My story is dramatic, with action-packed sequences and crushing character tragedies. I’ve been writing for over 15 years and am using all my skill to bring you a story of time-travel, heartbreak, and facing your destiny!
Please give the book a try, and leave a review if you can! Thank you!!
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Usually, when I read these novels it's to see murder and ra*e. So far this novel has none of that and for that you get a 0 star score from me. 4.2/5
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One of the top original novels right now. I r8 5 stars keep up the good work.
Ps. It would be great if the chapter release was a bit faster.
We do have a very interesting story here, going from games to cultivating directly. One of the only issues I found was in the loss of punctuation with run on sentences. Rob is interesting to follow but the character in game names is down right strange at times, for example one of his friends is called nohair as a joke and then it happens that he loses his hair. . . Ok. Very good story overall though and no overpowered or broken people yet. Good read can’t wait for more chapters.
