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A good read actually. But the descriptive department seems to be lacking. What I mean is that you really express yourselves and. I do feel the emotions of the characters. But the world background is what you need to describe the best. Anyways, continue working hard. Grammatical errors are also seen however just a bot of proofreading and you're done! Also, try increasing your vocab! Goodluck
I love how the characters show what is on their mind. It also makes me feel how the characters feel. I hope the author exploits emotions more. Though the first chapter seems to be too ****y, but I hope it will mature a little bit as it progresses. But still, I love it!!! Good job author!
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This story don't make any sense
It's too edgy
But it's still funny and entertain
And that's makes this novel worth to read.
I recommend y'all to give a shot to this story.
This story deserve more attention
Hello author,
Just finished the 7 chapters and the writing is pretty good. Please do you plan on continuing? ( i pray you do!!) It will be a shame to stop now ...snif snif.
This book is excellent. The story and character development is executed well. the world building and the ideas behind the cultivation concept is so vast and indepth. This work is exceeds expectations and I truly am enjoying it. your writing is unmatched
This is a very good story author, I love the info that you share, it's not bland and confusing as other stories, I also live how you exain the scenery very much and gosh I love your mc too
I am the author, I hope you like my novelThis is a novel with a big brain.If you like this type of novel, please leave me a comment and give the author a little more confidence!
100 chapters in and there is still no major plot. the MC is playing a game but I'm not sure what the story is about. splitting focus between the real world and the game world is unbalanced. the majority of the story happens in the game world and every update in the real world seems trivial. the MC doesn't really have any goals in the real world and the game aspect does not seem like a game, no other players interacting with the MC it seems like he is in a typical wuxia world with no consequences.
NOOOOOO IT DIDNT GET PICKED, I swear I should really stop reading trial reads before they get picked or else Ill grow attached to it too much. This was such a good one as well :((
the world was slowly introduced so there's no problem with it. the concept was unique, however, it was cliche at first but when I read it it was something uncommon and well planned. the author really keep up and I liked it how he decided to make the chapter longer