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Okay, let's leave the cringe worthy synopsis and focus on the world build based on the synopsis.How in the freaking world can they keep the MC and his family in the dark? human were social animals, he and his family would have friends, and they will then be notified, its a world wide program after all, there will be news on newspaper and net, or even word of mouth while they are prepping, its impossible for the MC and his family to never learn about it.Seriously. Oh well, I will read it first and edit this if they explained how, so if you didn't see the 'edit' notes, then it means, they didn't bother explaining.
I’m really interested in this story because the summary is very captivating. But i got thrown off by the ‘harem’ tag. Dear lord, nothing is worse than when reading d*mn good book, but got suddenly distrupted by passive agressive tsunderes or stubborn legal lolis. Thus, unecessary shallow arguments and misunderstandings ensues that drags on and onnnn? Can anyone please tell me how the harem aspect going to impact the overall story?(I put neutral 4 stars on all categories as i haven’t read the book yet)
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The refreshing and unique premise of the villain genre is what captivated me to read this novel. The protagonist is a merciless and cold overpowered killer who can instantly terrorize the entire population. In addition, I like the decisions made by the protagonist and how he doesn't back out in the face of humiliation. Truly a one in a kind novel. 10 out of 10 recommended.
An above-average story brought down a little by its poor translation quality. It's not as bad as some people are suggesting by comparing it to MTL, but it certainly isn't all that great. If you skip the random sentences that don't make sense, the novel is still readable. One thing to note is that you will find the usual arrogant dumb characters trope, though thankfully a bit watered down. Overall, it's better than a lot of other garbage, but it isn't exactly a high tier novel. Mid level novel, good if you don’t have other exciting stuff.
Your book is worth more than five stars, your choice of words is great and the flow is just wonderful. I've read all your chapters and can't wait for the next, thumbs the author up, you are a talented writer.
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I read 20 chapters, and it's boring, the MC is a soldier by all means (slave) he follows all orders from the system without asking, there is no intelligence collecting, the first thing he does is to accept a mission to hunt goblins and he acceptes being in another world very fast without even questioning it.
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