This is a bit slow paced, but I still enjoyed the character design as well as the world background. I love this is updated very fast. More power to you author
One of the best novels I have read in recent times. Zhouzhou is a goofball providing a complete package of wholesome entertainment? Every chapter keeps one hooked and there is always a scenario where the laughing riot doesn't end?
I really love the novel and the story behind it..hope to see more from you
too much contradiction, I was done with it recently, in that chapter he decided to share about the thaid knowlage and fight moreover he doesn't call the teacher immediately when someone strong come but waits and only call when they start to chase honestly speaking it's nothing realistic and good only frustrating
I enjoyed it but right as it was rolling along we get an abrupt end. I hope there is book two or something. World buildings was good as well as motivation but its too soon.
This novel has an amazing story, character development and is also very unique. I am really enjoying reading every chapter of this novel, so keep up the good work.
I don't even know how to find good original novels anymore (the rating score is always misleading), it's like climbing an arduous journey through extremely trash grammar 50% of the time. Normally I'd do an in-depth review on why I don't like a certain novel, but this novel is pretty self-explanatory.Writing Quality: 1.5/5 (My eyes are bleeding)Stability Of Updates: 5/5 (I'll give you this)Story Development: 2/5 (MC has a very steep learning curve) Character Design: 2/5 (Look one line above)World Background: 3/5 (Well, there's a world and it's not too bad, I can faintly picture an image.)If anyone wants me to do an in-depth review, simply @reply to me in one of my reviews and I'll do a truthful in-depth review if I can actually understand the flow of the writing. (I write these reviews so that the section for determining whether someone reads a story is actually truthful and not full of deceit.)
keep writing it's a great story maybe it will get picked up.
I really enjoy reading in the perspective of Kane and all the other characters. I love the world background and the struggles that each character goes through. It just makes them that much more special. As readers, we get to have fun reading about a whole new life and world. This writer makes it to where we understand the characters and story, and we enjoy it! I love the writing and I can't wait to read more! THIS IS A MUST READ!
It´s a fun read, its so great that it jumped straight to the mc enacting his plan for getting money for his dream life in the countryside. It skipped the generic part of AHHHHHH, I crossed worlds! reaction and info dump of his previous and new circumstances. The side characters are memorable, the story its funny but a little overdone with the smoking almost feel like the novel its been endorsed by "Red Orchid" smokes.
Nice book ????Author, I want to discuss something with you that's very important please I'm Nigerian, i don't know how to reach out to you, if with email or Instagram or WhatsApp
Another great novel more update for this one i'll be updating myself with these. I'm not used to reading harem novel but with the system plus kingdom building then this one is for me and you.. Please support the author to continue writing these novel. Thanks Again.