power of a symbol-a flag, a mythic story, a monument to some emotional
"Ok i promise" Hàte said calmly.
He smiled and walked over to her. She just stand there and looked at him as if she don't know him. The people around them were puzzled by their actions. They knew Lucas but they don't know who this goddess is. Lucas is a powerful figure so if he's approaching this goddess means that she must not be a normal figure.
Strange... He never smelt anything this good when Mosey was working.
Somehow that made him forgive his Blondie keepers…at least as far as being civil was concerned.
"...Fine." Pò conceded growling.
Shao Ling leapt back after crippling the Hazard Beast as it quickly- and awkwardly- turned around to face him with eyes glazed over with madness and rage at the injuries that the pale youth inflicted upon it. The blood in Shao Ling's veins burned with excitement as hot blood and adrenaline coursed through his body. It felt like he had been cultivating Heaven and Earth Qi as he fought the Hazard Beast.
After a few years, at the starting years of the 5th century from the rule of King Vikram, Huna King Mihirakula was defeated by a coalition army of King Yashodharman and Gupta King Baladitya. Hunas rule into the western provinces of Bharatvarsha got completely routed by this defeat. Many repressed warrior clans took the opportunity of the weakened state of Hunas and used it well to establish new kingdoms. After this event, only Hunas who assimilated themselves in native society remained in Bharatvarsha and their ruling clans and warriors were either wiped out or driven away.
"Wait," Naruto froze. Then he hit his head in exasperation before making a hand-sign. "Shadow-Clone jutsu!"
Shameless review from the author here. This is a mix of sci-fi, superpowers and magic in a way I haven't seen before. Nice pacing, plot and character development. This is all original, which makes it even better. a 5/5.
After reading 5 chapters, I think the story has good potential. Even though there are few mistakes here and there but they do not affect the story development too much.
Well now this is what I call a good translation, for everything else, I'd say its a decent story, not something ground breaking like shadow slave but still quite a good read...