Well when I first started reading this I was like it's another magic novel but as a I read further ahead the novel became amazing the world background is explained clearly I do like the character's in this story the translation quality is excellent to me (I don't nickpick) the only thing I want for this novel is more releases more more and more can't get enough of this book
Unlike your first book this mc is really not great.Naive Stupidprideful The story is interesting but very slow.The pov change so early in the story to show other characters is very bad in my opinion because I think side characters and mobs shouldn’t get so much screen time. The whole nationalsm like fanatics of the vampire race is also very annoying and I feel good that they lost because of how they act.
Interesting, comical and exciting read. Need more chapters!Need more chapters!Need more chapters!Need more chapters!Need more chapters!Need more chapters!Need more chapters!Need more chapters!Need more chapters!Need more chapters!
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I'm loving the story's character development and world-building. I'm looking forward to what's the story will turn out. Kudos to the writer.
Another interesting story. When you read the synopsis you want to read more about the principal character, and when you start reading the chapters you can laugh and imagine the situation itself.An entertaining read. I like it ❤
It’s not a bad story. The whole plot of the MC being reborn as a creator is a really interesting concept. Other than some disjointed points in the flow of the plot, overall it’s a fun story to read.
Would rate it higher but not much in 20 chapters! My standards may be low but all I want is a story that can keep my attention! If it catches my eye I rate them on if I think this story could grow! So I think this story has potential but see where it can fall off quickly!
Rare Concept , Nice story development , tad bit sarcasm and comedy which is good, hope you stay on main theme dont wave off to only showing his life but also regular power upgrade .
This one has potential! Although it's a bit slow at the beginning, the story totally flips after the revelation. It's a novel worth reading.
This story is something I look for everyday,it is very compelling with a nice mix of vr and real world the athour the author is very good at usimy both worlds to explore each other allowing for you to get a feel fir both her and her character in game something that can be rather shards as a balance between both is not the simplest to strike
So i want a novel like this where the people get stronger when they play the mage for example(cultivation online and mages are too op).if you any recommendations write it down.